Yay for people who can only write oneshots!
You should read mine sometime. -winkwinknudgenudge-

Anyhoo.

YAY FOR ALLAMERICANREJECTS!
Gotta luff em.

It was great. Uhm. The words starting with capitals got a tad annoying there.

But it was good.

oh ok i loved it good job you are awesome.

Smutty! :D i like it!

You do realize that if she were turning 17 she would be going to 7th *maybe* 6th year right?

just so you know, you say at the beginning of the story (when inviting harry) that its her 17th b-day but isnt it supposed to be her first?

come on make an other one allready like there really good but make an othre one please please please!

it's cool but there's only one!
or only one chapter!

Good, but it's kind of annoying how you capitalize so many words that you don't need to.

Good fic, but I really could not see that happening, I mean, why would Hermione trust Malfoy straight away like that??...

that was short but sweet none the less.
you really should reconsider and make it more than just what it is now. maybe like some people make it a oneshot except in more than one chapter? ^_^

I liked it a lot. Keep writing! When will the next chapter be up?

good story

good story,

Oh... -.- I really didn't awknowledge how old i made them.. did i. -.- oops.. well :) Thanks any way for tha Review ^_^ Its A Great Song... Next Time.I Must Rethink that. =^.^=' My Mistake. Ever So Sorry

Pretty good, but the fact that Hermione is having sex at 14 (it was the day before her birthday...i think)doesn't really work for me. Also she was a little to accepting of her parentage in her letter to Harry "it's all good" if her dad was just killed a little while ago I doubt she'd say it was all good. But aside from that it was a pretty good story :) and you have an awesome tast in music :P i love this song.