Aw! That was really good!
IDT

I liked it, but unless I understood wrong Snape died twice- once by Nagini and once in the fight.

That was so cool! I have yet to persuade anyone, but my sister that Severus Snape is good! Everyone says he has greasy hair so he's evil. That's stupid, and totally wrong!

Anyway, that was well-written, sad though, which I like. It's cool how you put Draco as the Chosen One, something I have never thought of, in my hours of sitting there and just thinking about the books.

Wishing you no Writer's Block,
~Me

That was absolutely poetic. Marvelous it was. I love reading fics like this - the ones that make you feel like you are dosing in and out of a dream. This one is really good, and this is actually the first cannon fic I have read after Book 6 came out. I really like where the story went. Great job!
Keep writing!
-Amu-

Nice.

I see no need to add anything else. Nice. *nodds head*

This story waa pretty good, but what about the prophecy? In it, it says only either Harry or Voldemort can kill each other? Well written though. It kind of seemed like a summary...I'm sorry, I'm starting to sound like my old English teacher *gasps*. What I should be saying instead: Very good! Keep it up!
If you should have some spare time, would you review my story? It's my first and I will appreciate any advice you have to give. Thanks!

I liked it! Funny, I usually don't go for stories that have anyone else but Harry being the hero, but Draco's my favorite character so I thought I'd give it a try. It was very well written, still gave Harry enough glory, even though he didn't complete the final task, and I also am a big fan of a Harry/Draco friendship. Great job.

Nice, written very well.

I like the idea behind this fic, it's very moving, but it doesn't seem like you've developed your own writing style yet. I suggest you read all the different types of fanfiction you can lay your hands on and practice writing some different genres.
To improve this story, don't give away the shock ending at the beginning. It has the potential to be very good.

wow, wonderfully written. Good job!

Aww... sad Harry. I like this fic! I adore one-shots, lol.

Uh, the part about Snape explaining to Draco that Dumbledore asked Snape to kill him? I just don't think it fits. But once I got past that, it's still a great fic!!

Nice work!!

Signed,
Regina.

Ouch, harsh. But I love it, you explained everything well. And thinking Snape killed Dumbeldore by orders was a nice sweet twist. And it was all creative and well-thought out.

Absolutely a end quite with marvelous musings to assist it! It feels as though the meadows have ripened at the entrance of sun! Excellent work Author! You are surely the ruby who has the high value!