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| Mahi-Mahi 2006-10-21 ch 1,  | abusegotta love it! great work -peace |
| Monochromatic Pylon 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseO.o you've done a good job. It was very nice written. I like Marlene's pov... |
| kori hime 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* Aw... So sad. It ook me a while to figure out that was Vincent. -.-;; Silly me. This well written. |
| Hell Rell 2005-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseYo MajinBakaHentai you faggot I'll smack off your Kuffi for thinking that rainbow shit you damn homo. |
| samantha 2005-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewow i REALLY LOVE this story i the paring is really nice to, marlene/cloud it's diffrent and i like it your should REALY make a chapter2 or some story where cloud does come back. I'd like to see marlenes exprission :)keep up on the wounderfullf writing |
| Verdot 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseNow THIS is a concept. And I love it. I love the description and the lack of names (though you give great hints) and all that. And I love the whole idea of the taint and all that. ^_^ ~Cendri |
| Salacassera 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed seeing Marlene's point of view. Her thought about how Cloud tainted the others was the line that hit me the most. |
| MajinBakaHentai 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseWhoo! Great work! I really did like seeing Vincent there, and do I detect some small implications of Cloud/Vin? ^_^ Love that you tied it to "It Ends With Me", I guessed you might do that when you said it was a deathfic. Thankye Quela! |
| CloudLov3r 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseEw you sicko! Marlene with the hots for Cloud? You're crazy. But I guess she was older at the moment, also what 7-8 year old does not know if he/she loves someone right? WHATEVER--It was a good story and Vincent at the end was awesome. I don't like that "Because I'm not dirty like him." part...WTF? -Muah ha ha ah ah ah aha ah |