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| AubreyWitch 2007-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseGah :( It's sweet but also sad to see GaaSaku chemistry somewhat exclude Naruto even as they reach out to include him. |
| Goatis 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abusevery sweet there towards the end, though I didn't know what to make of the beginning...I wasn't quite sure what it meant in the beginning and thought perhaps it wasn't consensual...but I guess it was, I do like the way that the two jinchuriki decide to share their 'treasure' so to speak... |
| YourAngelStandingBy 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseDoes this mean they have a threesome? I think I'm over simplifying the situation. -Angel |
| insipid_paragon 2007-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI. Wow, well. I confess something to you I've never confessed before. In a very general sense, I don't usually care for the idea of threesomes. It just gets so tangled, all the emotions and different personalities, and don't even get me started on all those limbs that start flailing when the smut gets going. But, wow, does Gaara and Sakura and Naruto--together--just click. The idea is wholly satisfying, somehow the potential for emotional angst and woe and other such problems isn't overwhelming, but rather is positively glittering with hope and happiness, and this fic is an altogether too tempting glimpse of a beginning of what could be a Very Fine Thing. |
| sillymail 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuse[chuckles] Cute. |
| Squishy Penguin 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abusegreat! |
| neo91 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseit was good but it needed more...more. i can't explain it. |
| yue no rei 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseshorter than your other ones and different too... interesting story |
| SabakuNoBrandye 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseas always. Gorgeous. |
| Me 2006-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseXD Dude. That's just greatness. The panicking!! |
| KuroiRuy 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute **! Keep writin!! |
| Details 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseAH. OT3! |
| amwong88 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was a bit disturbing cuz I've never liked Sakura while I DO like both Naruto and Gaara. So I was kinda ** when it was Sakura who ended up in the middle and causing all that awkwardness. But still...great story and very realistic and descriptive! |
| AngelOfDeath10 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI have a deep and not so secret love of OT3 fics. Narutodom is very complex shipping wise for me. Basically, I'm happy so long as Naruto, Sasuke, or Gaara end up with Sakura. In any fic. Truly. . . . but when any *two* of them end up with her. Well, now, isn't that just twice the fun and happiness? (We're talking fic world here.) Fun times as always. AOD |
| pntbtr 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei was disappointed that this wasn't an update to 'in stone', and then i read it... gut twisting, and then just sweet enough at the end. my only critique - having sakura in gaara's lap is a bit abrupt. consider something a bit more subtle? in any case - bravo. encore! |