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| Sassy18 2006-11-10 ch 11, | abuseHello there! OMG! I freakin' love this fanfic! Please update soon, I wanna see what's gonna happen when Faye goes to meet that freaky guy! That and I love that Spike is kinda watching over Faye...it's so sweet..such a guy thing to do! lol But anyway please update soon! |
| Laicamiel 2006-05-05 ch 11, | abuseHi. What a great story. Very in-character. I especially like the interaction between the Bebop three. Sanders is appropriately horrifying. I look forward to the next update. |
| Fuu and Momo419 2006-02-16 ch 11, | abuseOkay, I really really like this one. It took me about two or three hours to read all of it but it was worth the time. Update soon please! |
| thatwomanlisa 2006-02-07 ch 11, | abuseholy smokes this is good! I love how accurately you protrayed the characters - and the storyline seems very true to the series. Two enthusiastic thumbs up! |
| BunnyKat 2006-02-02 ch 11, | abuse(Bunny) CRAPOLA! I went to click the freakin' little next arrow button thingy and it wasn't there! I'm having a minor panic attack! Gawl! This is so full of angst and I LOVE it! I really think you should hurry up and make another chapter. Soon, cuz this kicks **! Update soon! :D |
| AegisX-TAIL- 2006-01-20 ch 11, | abuseit good, yet Locke's a little vicious, I think Spike could take him, he took Vincent. yeah, keep updating, i'll keep reading and reviewing. |
| Rynn Abhorsen 2006-01-08 ch 11, | abuseStarting a review is always the hardest... I absolutely love this story. You've captured the odd sort of dance that the members of the Bebop take around each other. Spike and Faye's relationship, in all it's twisted, psychoses-filled glory, is wonderful. I find it almost impossible that this is your first story. On another note, however, and please don't take this the wrong way, there are some small grammatical and tense errors. Some I've noticed are switching words like "were" and "where", or tense shifts in the middle of a sentence. However, these could be easily fixed by a beta (I've got one, since I never, ever catch my own errors). Don't get me wrong, I love love love love LOVE this story, but the little things can really detract. If you need a beta, you can email me at Love, Rynn |
| xXsilentxwhisperXx 2006-01-06 ch 11, | abuseI like it, as usual! Twas good! All I can say is that it was a bit out of character, and in all honesty, I think you're drawing this thing with Sander's out a bit much. I was so excited for Faye to finally find him and stuff in this chapter, and all she got was a little invitation...At any rate, it was good, as this entire story has been. 9/10 ~Whisper |
| InuBebop1016 2006-01-06 ch 11, | abuseBRAVO! Tho i wish you updated more often :( i love your story TO DEATH! keep it up! ;) |
| CrAzY-Fan-Fic-Addict 2006-01-06 ch 11, | abuseGood chapter, I think it was a good idea to have Faye leave, but Spike is going to be hopefully keeping her safe this time. Update soon^-^ |
| phoenix521 2006-01-06 ch 11, | abusei'm not sure if i've ever reviewed before, and for that, i'm sorry. your fic is coming along great! it's quite intense and disturbing and exciting and well written. to quote those mcdonald's commercials, "i'm lovin' it." this chapter was very good and deep and quite insightful to the characters. and i think you did a really good job keeping jet in character during the sequence where faye and spike ran off. i'm quite anxious to see how this all ends. it doesn't seem like it could end all that well, but with the reappearance of ed, i feel a bt more confident that things will end better. awesome job; keep up the good work and have a good weekend. (and yes, chem knows how to keep ya down :0 ) |
| angelfromynightmare33 2006-01-02 ch 10, | abuseaww that was really sweet |
| xXsilentxwhisperXx 2006-01-01 ch 10, | abuseWell, this took me a good...two hours. It's good! Very well written! Please tell me you're going to continue. The ending of the last chapter was brilliant, would have made a great conclusion in itself, but I want more!! MORE MORE MORE! I love how quickly the plot moved. It went a lot faster than some of the other S/F stuff I've read. Anyways, I've said my fair share. This is one of the few fics that I have absolutely nothing bad to say about, although it would be nice if you could expand on the dreams a bit ^_^ PERFECT/PERFECT! ~Whisper |
| storytellergirl 2005-12-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseGreat chapter, it was well worth the wait. Hope to see some more updates real soon! |
| Josie 2005-12-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseLovely. |