This is only about your flashback to the barn- it's beautiful how you've interpreted those little things done by Kevin and Winnie. Your imagination of the events after the kiss is really heart warming...I just wish they had stayed together.

I love it but why were there no girls in the story :-p

I liked it, Cant wait for Ch. 3

Oh my goodness this second chapter brought tears from my eyes it was beautifully written I can feel both their emotions in this oh please, please, please you must continue I so do love it Winnie/Kevin 4 ever I must know what happens next D

very good but PLEASE use the "enter" between dialogues. And pls work on sentence structure too. cannot stress enough how important that is to readers. i found myself skipping paragraphs cus it was all smooshed together

other wise very good hope to hear the rest

keep writing! really good, i love the wonder yeasrs. my favorite show of all time, really hope you continue to write because it seems so real i could actuall see thm while i'm reading it you know, well anyway i just hope you continue to finish up this story i'll be wiating

-peace

Finally, another Wonder Years fic! Very few of them around here...But I like it so far. Keep it up!