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colin
2009-07-08 . chapter 26
Hopefully there wont be anymore crippling injures that are beyond Gos ability to heal. Cause a crippled fighter is pretty damn useless. I hope you update again soon
Anonymous Reader
2009-04-30 . chapter 26
First of all it's great that your still writing this story, it's one of my favorites. I did find it a bit strange that this time their killing the slavers when the last slaver group that they took out back in chapter 17 they only ended up killing the head slaver. Other than that it was a good read & I hope to be reading more chapters soon to.
DCWestby
2009-04-09 . chapter 26
Huh, This is actually interesting.. Bit hard to get into at first6 but good nonetheless. Update soon.
NatalieEGH
2009-04-07 . chapter 26
Too bad about Konatsu but seeing as they will be in the world until they die now, maybe best. I cannot really see the members getting involved (sexually/romantically) with the locals and you had 7 people. I am not sure any attachments really would work but at least now it is balanced. If Ukyo can switch to Ryouga and Akane switches to Gos. Maybe not, maybe Ukyo with Konatsu and Akane with Ryouga but then you lose your mage. Whatever, Konatsu died as he would have wanted, and maybe there are other powers.

You still have spelling errors and you seem to be having more problems with rewriting a sentence and forgetting to clean up what you had before. There are more words missing than in previous chapters and much more left over.

Nabiki, I think is a bit too worried about the willingness of the group to kill now. They are no longer in a world where you have the luxury of not killing/maiming your opponents. Now it is kill or be killed in battle. Maybe if Gos or Nabiki can come up with some spell that will utterly destroy the will of the opponents turning them into little better than moving vegetables they can stop killing, but for myself and those I care about I think death is much more merciful. She should realize this and only worry if killing becomes enjoyable rather than a necessary (and hopefully still distasteful) task.

As to the story, I am obviously still reading and I quit with bad stories.
Joustingforcancer
2009-03-30 . chapter 26
Very cool story. As a big fan of Ranma and also as a gamer who has been playing D&D since the mid-nineties, the combination of the NWC (such as it is now) and the high-fantasy setting is a lot of fun to read. Keep up the good work.
Fluphy Ninja
2009-03-30 . chapter 26
an update eh, will wonders never cease but seriously nice to see an update
phoenix.ru
2009-03-30 . chapter 26
Yay! it still lives!
Hopefully the story wil become a bit "lighter" now (as in more optimistic). Wouldn't really mind a romance scene or two ^_^
borg rabbit
2009-03-29 . chapter 26
Great chapter, except the cliffie was worth two and a half 'Arrgghh's'.
Wonderbee31
2009-03-29 . chapter 26
Wow, this was a pleasant surprise to get in my mailbox today, and a good read here, and with the gang meeting together some here, will look forward to what goes down next time with all sides.
TegwenielWestwind
2009-03-29 . chapter 26
Really happy to see this being continued. Exciting chapter, and it helped wash the taste if bitter defeat out of my mouth as a reader, letting me instead chew on expectant hope.
TannimU
2009-03-29 . chapter 26
Another intriguing chapter. Glad to see you've returned to writing Ranma. I really like how you've evolved these characters. Nabiki's insights this chapter were spot on. Keep up the great work.
Zen
2008-08-20 . chapter 25
keep it going its good.
Sexy Neko Hibiki
2008-08-13 . chapter 25
What about Konatsu?! Can't you resurrect him too? This isn't like the books, Ranma should get him back to life for the bargain.
hedatary
2007-12-03 . chapter 25
You know, when i first saw this fic i was reluctent to read it. But i got bored and didn't regret it. Keep it up. But there is one thing that i don't agree with in your fic. There is very little monologue and too much of detail. Try and reduce that otherwise the readers will get bored. But anyway good luck with the fic and hope to look for more update. Anyway help you want i'd be able to help.
Natalie-E-G
2007-11-29 . chapter 25
The Matriarch wants knights errant?? Paladins?? Apostles?? This group could hardly be called visionaries but I guess they are in that would. So basically there job will be to provide an example to help "civilize" the world.

1. If the Matriarch could read their minds, it would have been nice to see Konatsu included.

2. Wouldn't healing some of the other mental and physical damage from the time they were captured not be appropriate. I realize it was not what the Nerimaians were asking for but they ... I am really not sure, they have just agreed to a contract that cannot be fulfilled without a complete change in the culture. That requires at least a full generation and that assumes the current generation agrees with the necessity and helps willingly.

3. Wouldn't doing something about Ukyou not also help too. She is probably my least favorite Nerimaian but a hothead, alcoholic, brawler/bully makes her effectiveness questionable. Unless of course you desire a mirror for the worlds population. But who would realize the mirror exists with that culture.

4. I do like that the Matriarch gave them a choice even if she knew they had no choice but to agree if they wished to remain who they were.
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