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hedatary 2007-12-03 ch 25, anon.	abuseYou know, when i first saw this fic i was reluctent to read it. But i got bored and didn't regret it. Keep it up. But there is one thing that i don't agree with in your fic. There is very little monologue and too much of detail. Try and reduce that otherwise the readers will get bored. But anyway good luck with the fic and hope to look for more update. Anyway help you want i'd be able to help.
Natalie-E-G 2007-11-29 ch 25,	abuseThe Matriarch wants knights errant?? Paladins?? Apostles?? This group could hardly be called visionaries but I guess they are in that would. So basically there job will be to provide an example to help "civilize" the world. 1. If the Matriarch could read their minds, it would have been nice to see Konatsu included. 2. Wouldn't healing some of the other mental and physical damage from the time they were captured not be appropriate. I realize it was not what the Nerimaians were asking for but they ... I am really not sure, they have just agreed to a contract that cannot be fulfilled without a complete change in the culture. That requires at least a full generation and that assumes the current generation agrees with the necessity and helps willingly. 3. Wouldn't doing something about Ukyou not also help too. She is probably my least favorite Nerimaian but a hothead, alcoholic, brawler/bully makes her effectiveness questionable. Unless of course you desire a mirror for the worlds population. But who would realize the mirror exists with that culture. 4. I do like that the Matriarch gave them a choice even if she knew they had no choice but to agree if they wished to remain who they were.
Innortal 2007-11-28 ch 25,	abuseAll well and good.
Wonderbee31 2007-11-28 ch 25,	abuseGood, and Ranma is himself, and wonder what this means for all concerned now, as I guess that they're all stuck there now, and forever?
ranger5 2007-11-27 ch 25,	abuseExcellent as always. It's been to long to know if this was the same deal Karl faced...or if he had Ranma's revelations. I just hope Ranma doesn't die "early" like Karl did.
Rubel 2007-11-27 ch 25,	abuseAWESOME!! Very well written great characterization. I can't wait to see how the Exiles accomplish their mission. Or should I say I can't wait to see them try. Thanks for the great read.
Nadrek 2007-11-27 ch 25,	abuseSigning up with no out clause to an entity that can resurrect you is eons of stupid. Signing this crew up to yourself for eternity or until they kill you in accordance with that very same contract is also stupid - shades of another fic where Ranma is rendered permanently immortal, and then Akane is... and for thousands of years, they shape the world - badly, in that case.
palgober 2007-11-27 ch 25,	abuseI think that the start of this chapter was cut off
Wonderbee31 2007-11-24 ch 24,	abuseNice, and going to be looking for what happenw ith the crew now that they've returned, and are a lot harder than they were the first time.
Nadrek 2007-11-24 ch 24,	abuseIt's good to see more of this, though I would have perhaps expected a quick stop by a local store while on the Earth side before seeing Arthur.
Zanfib 2007-10-24 ch 22, anon.	abuseI could have sworn that Deighton would have been in the other world already, and super-powerful also, as he would have been the loser of the magical duel that ages ago levelled the mountains there... Well, no harm done, as I like it better when I'm wrong because it means that the plot isn't that predictable. By the way, my thanks for a really well written story, I'm enjoing it a lot, even if it's a tiny bit darker than my usual readings. Since I always try to put some suggestions in here, try make Ranma train and improve in his art, that way he has to rely less on an obscure move that's also very ** his self. Otherwise develop a bit the void concept and integrate it a bit into his martial arts, so that it's less of an ace that magically appears when it's necessary. That said, please keep writing as I anxiously await the next chapter!
Nadrek 2007-10-21 ch 22,	abuseWell done yet again. Nabiki being the one to take him out was entertaining - perhaps at some point he'll realize that a noncombatant was the one to down him - he wasn't enough of a threat to rate a real combatant. Hopefully Gos is working on detecting mind magic, to avoid a repeat performance.
Natalie-E-G 2007-10-17 ch 22,	abuseSo the NWC (sort of) was under a geas. What was its purpose? The mage could not have expected Ranma to kill the dragon. Indeed had Ryoga not been so ashamed that he saved Ranma's life (was that a geas also?), Ranma would not have been able to know how to kill the dragon. With the dragon destroyed and the gate having been used, can Deighton sneak back? Is the gate destroyed on the other side for him? (It is now in an active, possibly erupting, volcano.) If Deighton is smart he will get them back. Even if he betrays them and transports him back without them, he will forever be looking over his shoulder for them finding out how to get back there. Personally I think his best option is to transport them there, quit his job, move to Paraquay, and try starting over with a new student. It gets them out of his hair, it keeps him alive, it mediates their desire for his life, it gives him a chance to run, and maybe if they succeed makes it not worth all the time and effort of finding him.
Mackon 2007-10-16 ch 22,	abuseAwesome Story.
ranma36 2007-10-16 ch 22,	abuseyou have a great story going, please don't make us wait so long for an update! p.s. Ryoga is my favorite character so PLEASE bring him back soon and I wouldn't mind seeing Akane healed either.

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