 Kioko the pirate 2005-08-20 . chapter 1Wow, interesting. you know I may just do something similar to this, I have all of these scenes in my head that are just so far off in my series it's driving me crazy as well. Lets just say that I have all of these scne's in my head that are so beautiful and yet so sad. I won't tell you those because it would reuin the story. Anyway, I can't wait to see how your series goes, by the way I just updated so yeah. Later. |
 Yaarp16 2005-08-19 . chapter 1 That was so sweet!So,in your next volume of The Defender,Lilo and Stitch are married as well as Mertle and Keoni,or are they just boyfriend and girlfriend?
Also,I have a suggestion.IF this was not a one-shot,then perhaps in the next chapter you could write about Lilo and Stitch's marriage and if you want,Mertle and Keoni's.But if this is a one-shot,at least show it in your next volume or whenever they get married.There are four things I LOVE reading about in a Lilo/Stitch story.
1)When Stitch falls in love with Lilo and vice versa then they admit their feelings over a few chapters.
2)Stitch purposing to Lilo(Which made me thrilled about this story)
3)Showing Lilo and Stitch's marriage
4)Having kids,but not showing what they DID to have them
I guess you could say that I'm the biggest Lilo/Stitch fan of them all!Almost all of my stories that I'm keeping to myself,don't mean to tease you or any Lilo/Stitch supporters,are all Lilo and Stitch doing romantic stuff together.
Oh and,sorry I haven't been reviewing The Defender.The chapters were excellent,I just didn't feel like reviewing.Don't worry,I have been reading the chapters and they all were great.And what makes it even better,is that you stretched the romance between Lilo and Stitch,but you still need a little work on the romance between Mertle and Keoni.
If this was NOT a one-shot,then update soon!Or if it was,then update the next version of The Defender. |