That was good. I have to say the last paragraph was the best one by far. I love the way Kurama thinks of Hiei, and the fact that he called Hiei a diamond in the rough just seems to fit both demons so very well. And Hiei running off with his son so no one would see him cuddling him and protecting him was also so in character. Again I loved it. I will keep this review short since I have not done that in the past. Until next time, ja ne!

oh that has to hurt but it was ok

This is such a heart warming story. *sob* I love how Hiei becomes all so protective, well its just too bad that he doesnt want to show his protectivness side, he is such a mother to Kaihei, even if he is a male, he still shows how motherly he can be.

Words cant say how nice this fic is, great fic, really great. You should continue... =^.^=

great side story! you are good at writing! write more!^_^

good story!

good story!

I lover your writing. You are amazing. Everything you right is golden. You have the touch. Anyway nice job!

hm. that was diffrent. but it was good

I have to say, I'm impressed. You must do a lot of research for your stories. More than that, you really go into a lot of detail about things most other people wouldn't bother taking the time to write about. Not just in this story, but in all of the stories in your series.

Wonderfully written, of course. Keep up the excellent work! ^_^

that one was nice.

im not quite sure WHAT that was... but it was interesting.

But...why is the procedure done? What is its purpose? I have neaver heard of this before.

that was interesting...but i dont exactly understand why they needed to have that done...oh well i guess ignorance is bliss. ja ne for now, keep up the good work.

...that was...wow...I knew what a circumsision was, but...damn, I didn't know that's what happened. O.O; Anyways, keep writing, I'm looking forward to more one shots from you! ^_^

Alright i honestly don't understand what even HAPPENED to Kaihei but it was good i'll give you that! If you could like contact me about what actually happend that would be AWESOME! Good chapter i am loking forward to seeing all the one-shots you have!