 Royal Thief 2006-09-15 . chapter 1It's a good story, I like the idea, but the only thing that I don't get is that Anzu has virtually no reaction to the fact that Bakura just killed her teacher. (Or at least severely injured him) I'm just saying that I find it strange that she wouldn't even acknowledge that big of an event. |
 Rae 2006-05-03 . chapter 1 You should work on your grammar and the style of your writing. Oh, and POV. It gets confusing. But the plot was... okay, I guess. That's all. Bye~!! |
 Shiro Ryuu 2005-11-30 . chapter 1Well, I was skeptical at first, due to the somewhat cliche arguement, and the concept of a play about Duel Monsters almost made me stop reading, but... boy am I glad I didn't, because the end was just that great ^_^ Their conversation at the end is somehow precisely perfect. Not to mention Bakura kicking that guy's **; that was pretty awesome too ;) I have now decided that this is a Cute Couple; good job! |
 IcyWindShine 2005-11-05 . chapter 1I remember this story! I remember asking why you never posted it on FFN. I love this story, so cool.
Btw... GET ON AIM, CHESSY!
I need to talk to you. .-. |
 Demented Insane Spirit 2005-09-03 . chapter 1 aww! Don't know if it's actually SOTR that's writing this and what not, but I like it anyway. >> I wanted to do 'New Resident of the Puzzle' but fOX got it before me. Welp, either way, can't wait for those peeps to update! Ciao |
 YaoiPrincess16 2005-09-03 . chapter 1Your oneshot story is great!Keep it up!:) |
 Millennium 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Good job =)
Just two things...
"let's have a little drink before deciding what to do with her. She looked terrified.
- Missing a close of the " and the let's need to be captialized =P
- and also when ending someone talking... I noticed that you barely used any full stops or comma's, but thats just my input ^^;;
Good story though, its nice to see a good ending... even if something like that does happen to the 'bad guy' in the end ^^;;
~ Millennium |
 Blackstrawberry 2005-08-22 . chapter 1Awsome Job! |
 Chained and Tortured 2005-08-21 . chapter 1*Claps hands* That was exellent! |
 Dragons of Life 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Aw!! That was really good. I loved it^^
Keep it up! |
 Innocence Within 2005-08-19 . chapter 1... You already know what I think of "Made to Heal". An enoyable read, and a story that made Julia react in such a way that has made my day.
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 PsychoSisters 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Well I think I'm just about as surprised as any other person that you FINALLY WROTE SOMETHING! Even if it's old, it's still something...and I did read the one Anne-chan did. I like both :) Nice to see you back.
~PCU |