Again very well done.

k, ill be sure to, im gonna go check your site now

Ok, I know this can sound so horrible, but I tried to read this, but it's just...well, I couldn't get through the beginning. It just like Sara was told that she was blind and she immediatly accepts it. She dosen't really even care. And just how you wrote the beginning, that the three of them were called on a case then a bomb goes off, and she's blind. It's too much to have in the short amount of writing, especially when you didn't give too much explanation on the story. There was no introduction just-BOOM story. I think if you would go back, add more, explain more, and try to place yourself in the character this story would be much better. I mean if you experianced an explosion and was blinded as a result, would the first thing you ask be, 'how can I continue with my career?' Try to give more life to your characters. I'm sorry if I sound so mean, If I got this review, I'd be **, but I'm just thinking of ways that you can improve you story. Take my advie or don't. But I do think the story line is pretty cool. Keep writing! :)

One small problem - once corneas are burned, they don't regenerate. Maybe you should use the internet to look up facts that you want to use in stories - it would certainly help your readers.

I guess for me the problem with this story is not the idea..it's creative enough..it's the dialogue and writing...it's stilted and awkward.
No one talks like this..it's too formal.
Your characters lack emotion and reaction and you are too busy moving them from place to place like stick figures.
I would go back and work on just the first paragraph.
develop that scene and build some tension.
Try not to resolve every issue immediately..you have a bomb then another bomb and then blindness and hospital and home and caretaker assignments and wow I'm out of breath...stretch out the events..make them earn the resolutions..throw some emotion in..
Slow down...the idea is there..start playing with the characters and make them real..give them motives and purpose..

wow...thats all i can say

i like the story though, it is very fast paced...keep it up! i wish you are a snicker!