Very good. I love it when the surroundings just seem to fit the emotions and meanings. You know like the clouds and the metephorical stuff about the sun coming out. It fits so well, I love it :) . You did an exelent job! I loved the Carson/Sheppard friendship.

-Miyth

Oh, I loved John's comments to poor depressed Carson. Great Fic!

That had me really gripped. Good stuff. Could feel the breeze there at the end. Thanks.

*claps*

Very well done. This episode had the potential for so much more character development than actually occurred, and I easily can see this happening. I also agree with the fact that Shep and Beckett need more interaction than Beckett simply saving his sorry butt over and over! :-)

Beautifully written

thanks

rare tag for a rare episode! Nice job! luv that it was john "comforting" carson, and not rodney, as you see carson & rodney together (gen AND slash) so much these days.

Rock on! :)