That was awesome. I love your depth as a writer and how you conveyed Himeno and Hayate's relationship. Bravo!

Beautiful dear. Beautiful. COulnd't have stated better words from my lovely vocabulary. This was a quite wonderful oneshot deary...

~Frozen Memoria~

Wonderful, wonderful short story! I loved it! You did such a good job of capturing emotion without being cheesy. One of my favorite fics!

two words: me like

Simple and delicately cute! Aww...Why can't love happen like that in the real world?

Hoshi Taki-bi
Starfire in japanese

Sweet, fluffy, beautiful. I love this one-shot! Everything was good except for a couple of typos (like waste instead of waist @.@). Excellent! Nicely written.

I like it ... keep up the story

sweet and good work :) i hope oneday Hayate will move in with Hemeno permantly i suspect he will have to oneday or maybe she could go to leafenia

YOU HAVE TO FIX THIS ONE TYPO! IT"S JUST SO WRONG!
waste-->waist

do not confuse garbage with the body part please...it just sounded so wrong when I read this and made me cringe >;