This is me calling your attention to a neglected story. For a whole year stories like this have gone unfed and unnoticed. For a simple $1.99 a month you can insure that these stories are fed and have access to quality healthcare...

Anyways. Did you stop this story or just forget about it? Cause i really like the idea and would like to see it continue.

PLEASE CONTINUE!

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Wow...what a 'darling' child...

Loved it so far. Continue?
And yeah, it does weird stuff to me, as well.

Hi... what happened to you? 'cause you haven't updated in almost a month, and, therefore, as per to your plea for, er, updating 'incentives' (and because your one of my favourite authors) I say this:
There are, as of today, September 6th, exactly 239 days until Spider- Man three comes out, which is your goal to have the stories you wanted done, done, right? it's less than a year now...

another great chapter, can't wait until you update another one.

Cheers!

*Ace*

Okay, I love the title. :) So true... I wonder if ANY of my Spidey stories are fire-less...

Still love the actuators. LOL!

And a fellow writer here taught me the secret for the stuck together words. Put TWO spaces in between the words, then hit save again. It means you have to check and re-check the document before you update, but it solves the problem.

Rockin'- you updated! (Don't worry, vactation is an acceptable excuse in my books. X3)I was happy to see the Friendly Neighbourhood Doctor Octopus, because its nice to have him- even with Peter in his body- being the hero for once. I laughed when he tried to leap up- the passerby must've thought that he was a crazy- but was almost in hysterics when he shouted; "Look out New York! Here comes your friendly neighborhood Doctor Octopus!" I bet that their suspicions of Peter/Otto being unbalanced were confirmed the second before the actuators ripped out. I went 'aw' when we got to the part where people were grateful at Peter/ Otto started saving people, too bad that some of the people died. (Why the closet?!)Pete's so nice. =) That kid's evil. Language, language.
The best touch, tho, was when you had them notice the same fire. It's nice that Otto/ Pete wants to be a hero all on his own, too. No matter how much you deny it, Otto Octavius, you are good at heart.
And, before I heard the story behind Harry, (he's one of the THREE villains in Spider-Man 3- THREE!) I pretty much had a heart attack. I was like OMG Otto/ Pete & Pete/ Otto!
Overall, four (out of five) stars. You've, once again, delivered your standard that put you on everybody's favourite list.
PS- now I have something I can use if you leave us hanging again, so be warned- no, not death threats.

Nice chapter! Your friendly neighbourhood Doc Ock hasn't surfaced as much as I'd expected, but don't be fooled- I'm not complaining, especially since there's no way you can avoid it next time... *Evil grin* You got JJ spot- on, too. He was, as usual, hilarious. Everything's going just perfect for Otto- Peter, isn't it? XD Also, lol at the actuators- they *do* know that they'll have to physically restrain Pete- Otto when they get to the fire if they don't want him to help. (forgive me for being off- colour; I'm half high on 'yay!- she - posted-ness' and not really thinking clearly. XP Also, good for you on the whole smoking warning thing- to quote a sign I read on a bus once: 'If these two people [arrows pointing to two window seats]smoke a pack a day, one of them will eventually die from it.' That is scary, especially because I happen to actually know two people who smoke. And, I have thought that getting Otto to smoke in a scene was a bad idea- sometimes people prefer the 'bad guy' to the 'good guy' and if ever there was opportunity for that, then Spider- Man 2 manifests it. I bet you thatmore than one person has watched the movie and gone, 'If Doc Ock does it, then I should try' and tried.
About your respose to me, oh- you deleted them. I thoght that there was a malfunction or something. Also, I get what you mean by not being able to write more than one at a time- that just results in getting half- completed stories everywhere. (Why do you think I haven't got an account yet?) Just focus on one at a time, get it done well, move on, and ignore me. Oh, and don't expect me to be able to threaten you- it isn't in my nature unless provoked by some of my least favourite people. You'll only hear my threats if you leave us hanging for months again... if ever.

OMG - Bossy, Happy, Lazy and Mute. Loved that! Can't wait for the next one!

Yet another hilarious chapter, congrats! I could just imagine it- Peter-Otto in full eight- limbed glory with Otto- Peter's right hand in both of his -real- ones, posistioning the arm and the fingers, (Otto- Peter's in his Spider-Man costume sans mask,)Otto- Peter fumbling out the phone and nearly wetting himself when J starts yelling, Otto- Peter dancing while shooting webs (he has -lots- of time on his hands, I see...) It's like the fun never stops! Also, lol about the 'explanation' thing- you really had me going, or at least for the part I understood- and about the whole 'Does Doctor Octopus have a cold or is he doing drugs' thing, although I've never imagined him to stoop so as to do Tylenol. My only critque is that you're getting Otto out of character at times- he's way too serious to actually act like that in this situation. Other than that, though, no complaints. Please update!
PS- You/ Crystal/ somebody should check the reviews for 'Of Honey and Bees'- you'll find a new one!

That was great. The insults, the insults! Breaking the trophy. Classic!

This is really funny. I love the concept, and Otto and Peter are so hilarious. (I love fics where two people switch bodies. What can I say, it's a guilty pleasure.) So, write the next chapter already.

Great you updated. I love this story, i really do. And i think your a brilliant writter as well, well Done.

Ace