|Reviews for Fear Factor with the Sonic gang|
| chaotix extremist 1/5/06 . chapter 2
Oh, that's a different sally!
Can my charries be in it?
Personality:Random, Insane,(not as much as Liz) Smart, Funny, Sly, Observative.
Attire:Red shirt saying "Rockin' Ninja",White shorts,brown belt,sword on back,yellow eyes,purple scales,purple hair with black streaks,black headphones,white gloves,yellow horn and a tan muzzle.
Bio:A ninja and Espio's faincee. She leads a detective agency called Team Arcade. Tomo has the power of fire, water, and thunder. She is a proud Sonic, Amy and Chris hates perverts.
Personality:Sly, Perverted, Serious, Queit.
Attire:Black leather vest, white fur, navy blue eyes, 3 green bangs, black boots, purple wings,white gloves, and beige muzzle.
Bio:The spy in the Arcade Detecive Agency since he can turn invisable. He was Rouge's past boyfriend and a skilled jewel theif. Tony loves nothing more than to spy on girls changing, but always gets caught by Tomo and has the shit kicked out of him.
| Max Fuchs 11/14/05 . chapter 2
Woah...I should have noticed this earlier...oh well...
You do realise you have full rights to use Max, right? With a disclaimer...oh wait...I didn't give you the contract...*Holding it* ehehehe...
I have to admit, I'm already loving this!
Now since your wrighter's bloack apparently has left you...A LONG SUMMER CAN CONTINUE! WOOHOO!
| Lady Chitose 11/13/05 . chapter 2
Wow, I didn't know sugar was so dangerous.
What am I saying...I wrote a story about the dangers of sugar.
Anyway, you may want to consider spacing out your text more so it's easier to read. Like every time a sentence ends, put a space between that one and the next. It helps make your story look neater.
Well, as Turbo said, hopefully now that your writer's block is gone a Lo(insert however many Os)ng Summer will continue.
Now, I'm going to get high on pocky...If that's possible. SQUEE!
| chaotix extremist 11/12/05 . chapter 2
I hate Sally, KILL HER KILL HER!
| Turbo Tails 16 11/11/05 . chapter 2
BAKA? YOU CALL ME A ばか!
Heh, I didn't know you were learning Japanese too, すごい
So it seems that the TV show is not a large part of the story, but of what shit is going on behind the scenes. I hope that now your writers block is gone, you can continue Long Summer. You might want to change the rateing to M, you used fuck more times than I did in one chapter of my M rated stories.
| lilangel12 9/26/05 . chapter 1
Yay! A funny story! You probably know crazy ol' Starlight from the Amazing Race; you may use her if you want...
Starlight: I... hate... you...
Me: ...I hate you, too! _ UPDATE! IT'S FUNNY! _ I LIKE CHEESE!
Me: ... _;
| Lady Chitose 8/26/05 . chapter 1
Yay! I like Fear Factor. Funny so far. So you need fan characters for this story? If so, you can pick one of mine to use. Update!
| 123NumberGirl456 8/20/05 . chapter 1
a bit disgusting but not bad!
| Spectral Swordsman 8/19/05 . chapter 1
Wierd, but funny! Go on, man. This story has a good concept.
| Turbo Tails 16 8/19/05 . chapter 1
It's a good thing that I ditched the idea of writing a story like this or I'd be super cheezed off right now. Very funny, continue.