| Reviews for Fear Factor with the Sonic gang |
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chaotix extremist 1/5/06 . chapter 2 Oh, that's a different sally! Tony:Stupid. Can my charries be in it? Name:Tomo Nicnname:Tomo-chan Age:16 Gender:f Speices:Chameleon Personality:Random, Insane,(not as much as Liz) Smart, Funny, Sly, Observative. Attire:Red shirt saying "Rockin' Ninja",White shorts,brown belt,sword on back,yellow eyes,purple scales,purple hair with black streaks,black headphones,white gloves,yellow horn and a tan muzzle. Bio:A ninja and Espio's faincee. She leads a detective agency called Team Arcade. Tomo has the power of fire, water, and thunder. She is a proud Sonic, Amy and Chris hates perverts. Name:Tony Age:17 Gender:M Speices:Bat Personality:Sly, Perverted, Serious, Queit. Attire:Black leather vest, white fur, navy blue eyes, 3 green bangs, black boots, purple wings,white gloves, and beige muzzle. Bio:The spy in the Arcade Detecive Agency since he can turn invisable. He was Rouge's past boyfriend and a skilled jewel theif. Tony loves nothing more than to spy on girls changing, but always gets caught by Tomo and has the shit kicked out of him. |
Max Fuchs 11/14/05 . chapter 2Woah...I should have noticed this earlier...oh well... You do realise you have full rights to use Max, right? With a disclaimer...oh wait...I didn't give you the contract...*Holding it* ehehehe... I have to admit, I'm already loving this! Now since your wrighter's bloack apparently has left you...A LONG SUMMER CAN CONTINUE! WOOHOO! |
Lady Chitose 11/13/05 . chapter 2Wow, I didn't know sugar was so dangerous. What am I saying...I wrote a story about the dangers of sugar. Anyway, you may want to consider spacing out your text more so it's easier to read. Like every time a sentence ends, put a space between that one and the next. It helps make your story look neater. Well, as Turbo said, hopefully now that your writer's block is gone a Lo(insert however many Os)ng Summer will continue. Now, I'm going to get high on pocky...If that's possible. SQUEE! |
chaotix extremist 11/12/05 . chapter 2 I hate Sally, KILL HER KILL HER! |
Turbo Tails 16 11/11/05 . chapter 2BAKA? YOU CALL ME A ばか! Heh, I didn't know you were learning Japanese too, すごい So it seems that the TV show is not a large part of the story, but of what shit is going on behind the scenes. I hope that now your writers block is gone, you can continue Long Summer. You might want to change the rateing to M, you used fuck more times than I did in one chapter of my M rated stories. さいしんのものにする! さいよなら! |
lilangel12 9/26/05 . chapter 1Yay! A funny story! You probably know crazy ol' Starlight from the Amazing Race; you may use her if you want... Starlight: I... hate... you... Me: ...I hate you, too! _ UPDATE! IT'S FUNNY! _ I LIKE CHEESE! Starlight: 0_0 Me: ... _; |
Lady Chitose 8/26/05 . chapter 1Yay! I like Fear Factor. Funny so far. So you need fan characters for this story? If so, you can pick one of mine to use. Update! |
123NumberGirl456 8/20/05 . chapter 1a bit disgusting but not bad! |
Spectral Swordsman 8/19/05 . chapter 1Wierd, but funny! Go on, man. This story has a good concept. |
Turbo Tails 16 8/19/05 . chapter 1It's a good thing that I ditched the idea of writing a story like this or I'd be super cheezed off right now. Very funny, continue. |