i really did get into it by the end of the story. i really liked the villian she was cool, and sassy. i liked how it told how the girl felt when she was kissed. i thought you could really get the emotion. i didnt like the long wedding section. because im a boy i guess.

I rally couldn't get into it.

It is a good chapter, but where does Ann come in? I am kinda confused...Happy writing!

Something is rotten in the state of Tuvok...Looking forward to more, Happy writing!

Is the next chap gonna provide more background info? Looking forward to it! Happy writing!

okay, so i'm a little confused and your grammars kinda screwy (like i can talk! ^_^) but i do wanna know what happens, update soon pleaz! ^_^

~HIKARi

I like it! I especially like the fact that she rammed her head into the medical console after the Doc deactivated himself *lol* That was a very nice touch. I can just imagine the Doc doing that! YAY!
Happy writing

Keep it up! Happy writing!

It is an interesting beginning...I hope you continue, & happy writing!