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| Scar'd 2008-05-23 ch 10, anon. | abuseWasn't Cain supposed to be in this chapter? Still..brilliant!! next chapter please! |
| anon 2008-05-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseYes Cass rocks |
| ANONYMOUS 2008-05-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseGood story, ROCK ON! |
| Pivitor 2008-05-13 ch 9,  | abuseHey, just thought I'd let you know I absolutely love this. Every character sounds so right, Cass is treated with respect, and the villains and minor characters are well thought out and interesting. I especially like the use of Katana as a foster mother for Cass. As well as Oracle means, her and Cass don't really seem to jive with that motherly bond. I also loved the use of the Teen Titans (especially Raven, who acted just as I thought she should) as well as Batman and Batgirl's big talk. That took a total 360 from where I thought it would go, which was a very good thing! Batman not being a dick! I like! The only things I didn't like were: 1: the changes to the Blue Beetle's backstory. My favorite part about Jaime is that he has a family that accepts, supports, and loves him both in his civilian and super-hero identities. Taking that away from him, it almost isn't Jaime. However, seeing as you're working with a shared continuity, I'm sure that's not your idea/fault. 2. The treatment of Spoiler: While she was never the smartest character, saying Steph deserved what she got goes a little too far. War Games was a classic case of bad writing and, in Steph's case, character assassination. She'd have never been that dumb if she wasn't mandated to be. Still, if you're brining her back like you seem to be (the girl with the costume in the bag in Chapter 9), then all may just be forgiven. Keep writing, I'll keep reading! |
| Sandz 2008-04-06 ch 9, anon. | abuseIncredibly written! your portrayal of cassandra cain amazes me! Continue! |
| ngear 2008-03-28 ch 9, anon. | abuseGood update, this story continues to grip me! |
| anon 2008-03-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseCool I love Cass and Cain and Shiva |
| Raptor Lord Number 3 2008-02-21 ch 8, | abuseWell, it was good enough to drag me out of retirement from So, great story. KEEP IT UP! |
| Salt 2008-02-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseExcellent story so far! Please do continue to write! I eagerly await your next chapter! |
| ss3dj 2008-02-11 ch 8, | abuseawsome story! |
| opin 2008-01-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseExcellent chapter, the fight with the thugs was really well done as was the emotional confrontation with clue(less)master. Congrats! |
| anonymous 2007-12-31 ch 7, anon. | abuseAwesome stuff here I have heard from wiki that cass is good again and is in the outsiders, im not going to to bother reading the comic though (bad experience) that and i've considered this story to be like, the last bastion of decent cassandra cain stories. So keep up the good work |
| ngear 2007-12-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is.. incredible. The scope, the depth, the action, the character... Please, update soon! |
| opin 2007-12-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseGreat to see more of this. Well done! |
| sol113 2007-11-25 ch 7, | abuseExciting, intelligent and gripping! Something unusual and cool is being constructed here. |