By gar...this has left me speechless! Amazing...simply amazing! Gold stars to you! *showers Jia with glitter* A more mature-ish Mika-chan...I like :)

This is one of the best AS fanfics I've read in awhile,I was pleased to see you managed to make Michael's development from very childlike to mature understandable. Most fanfiction's that see Michael undergo a personality change are often OOC in a few ways but yours however is not. I'm going to keep a look out for any future AS fics from you because I really liked this one!

I am really awed by this piece you wrote; it's hard to find good Angel Sanctuary fics, so when I saw yours many months ago, I was really impressed. Your writing style is just..awesome, and I love how you make each character of Angel Sanctuary reflect and think back.

This is really an awesome piece of work.

Hey, this was really, really great! I'd really love to see a sequel or something.

The characterisation of Mi-chan was spot-on IMHO, that seemed like how he'll act at the end of everything in AS.

Wow! That was GREAT! I wish to read about Raphael's awakening, so if it isn't a problem for you to do another chapter...