|Reviews for Angel's Heart|
| oursolemnhour49 2/17/11 . chapter 11
I normally don't review the older fics, but I really love this story. Some of the writing is a little unpolished, but I honestly love how you characterize Kratos and Anna, and I really love the pace of this story- we really got to see what would make them fall in love with each other, when so many Krannas don't go into that detail. I really, really loved reading this, and I hope you update soon, if you still plan on continuing. I'll put on my favorites with the hope that you do!
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 11
I don't think the titles are bad I like the repetition of each one having Angel's in them
nice use of Polar Opposites with Sylvarant's gate opening during the New Moon
Anna who do u think wrote the book of Martel - LOL
Ok wouldn't Zelos not yet be born at this point since he and Lloyd are the same age?
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 10
Yay kiss scene.
Well next chapter's the last one you have for now and Lloyd isn't even born yet.
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 9
Lol yeah sweet it the last word I would use to describe Kratos too
I can sum up my feelings towards the end of the chapter quite easily:
AWWWWWWWW, so cute. You really have a knack for creating Heartwarming moments
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 7
And surprisingly that's how it is Anna (all that's gone on between them started with Martel)
I was smiling at the end good heartwarming moment there
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 6
Being left behind in time, it's almost like Anna predecessed Presea in this...scratch the words "it's almost like"
Ah the tomato gag, of course.
Really enjoying this, I know I keep saying that but it's true
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 5
Why do I get the feeling that, just as with Anna's parents, something's going to go horribly wrong with this Brian fellow,
Well I wasn't far off the mark, I figured either marriage or a new girlfriend, doesn't seem like Anna's bothered by it though. Of course perhaps Kratos is certainly relieved
...ok so she is bothered a bit by it it seems. Last time I make assumptions.
Great chapter. Going to continue reading I love this
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 4
Jeez you'd think in 4000 years Kratos would learn about the Psychological aspect known as the Cocktail Party Effect.
Has anyone ever told you you're a heartless bastard - If only once I'm sure many have thought it lol. But that's what makes Kratos the stoic badass he is
You write well that's what's keeping me glued to this story
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 3
Isn't customization normally free?
I loved the rain bit, that was a nice touch
| draconichero21 11/5/10 . chapter 2
I had a feeling her parents were either dead or missing. Seven years...if Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time is anything to go by Seven Years changes A LOT of things
Boyfriend...boy am I lucky Kratos isn't exactly harboring feelings for her yet.
this is good. I'm going to keep reading
| draconichero21 11/4/10 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm liking this. I'm going to continue my reading of this. Glad to see I'm not the only one who thought Kratos and Yuan were friends of sorts until Kratos went back to Cruxis.
this is written rather well and I'm interested to see how it continues
| Readat3108 3/22/09 . chapter 11
| NoeinKya 7/2/08 . chapter 11
YES! Someone updates!
I'm so happy!
I LOVE you're fic so much!
Please continue as soon as you can!
(I'd put more in my review, but it's really late and my bro wants me off his computer... heh...)
Update very very soon! Please?
I'll be waiting!
| The Quote Bandit 7/1/08 . chapter 11
Yes! I must finish my comment! (is back online 10 minutes later)
I just came to the end, and I hope you update soon ) I LOVE IT!
And I couldn't help but think during the dance, "Wow, Kratos has crazed fangirls in the ToS world, too? How much smex can that guy really have?"
And now, Truly, I am pooped. Pawsquat. I think I came back to the computer to do something else, but I totally forgot.
| The Quote Bandit 7/1/08 . chapter 7
I must list what I need to say (I'm doing this as I read, bear!).
1. I've only read one other KratosxAnna thing before, and it was dwarfed in comparasion to this. I can really imagine Kratos saying all those things, and it's a all-natural, organic love story! Not too much fluff, yeay!
2. I share Kratoss' hate for tomatos. So slimy. The tomatos might have some hidden meaning of life and deaf and love and whatnot, but I'm too tired at the moment to notice.
3. Yuan's hair IS pretty! I wanna touch it, it's prolly soft! I wonder how much conditioner he uses...
Gah, I'm too tired to continue (only 2 more chapters! DX) But basically, it was awesome!