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| Liz100193 2006-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehardhitting. i think you should do a saqual. Loved it |
| mrs. tingles 2005-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei love your story! its so well written and the pace you set is awesome!! the characters are so true too! i just loved it and wished you would continue it! its so good.. |
| TLWROX 2005-09-04 ch 1,  | abuseI have always wondered about Grissom's past and what makes him push Sara away- this was a great explanation. Very well written. :) :) :) |
| Eden Eyes 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I loved this! PLEASE continue it, this could be awesome! Loved it! |
| lalaforte 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent! I'd love to see a continuation of this, especially with you leaving us hanging a bit there at the end. I really want to see what happens between them. I've always known Grissom had gotten burned badly, but this is a new way of looking at it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! ~K |
| Miss Adelon 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOh yes. When I started reading this I thought I was going to get the pleasure of reading a new "Trial of the Heart" but I'm not disappointed at all! Loved the little end talk. No blockbuster gone with the wind kiss. Very true to character.. although of course, the former wouldn't be a bad thing...;) Oy, and dark Grissom, just oy |
| kjt1 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseFantastic! Great plot and very well written -) |
| And Also With You 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. So compelling! I was on the edge of my seat in that interrogation. Great job with the suspense. I also love the resolution--that it was substantial, but not necessarily blatant. No "kiss, kiss, hug, hug, we're in love now." It was deeper than that, and more powerful. Excellent fic! |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abusei really liked this story...maybe we need a follow up chapter to see where they go from there...what do you say? Please. Sassy |
| leddy 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely amazing. I love it when Grissom actually loses his cool. So nice that Sara went to talk to him yet didn't press him on what happened. |
| Denese925 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI am trying so hard not to cry right now. This is an amazing story. You know these characters so well and it shows. |
| Veronica10 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. How about a sequel? Please! |
| Megara1 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseHi !! Its the second time I read that story ( one on the Geek Love Community at Live Journal ) and as the first time I'm totally speechless !! Great past story for Grissom, Hudson is really THE mad man and I really enjoy how Grissom is opened toward Sara !! Great fiction Megara1 |
| Little Webby 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is a truly amazing and inspirational piece of writing. You capture every detail perfectly, it's easy to imagine it happening exactly like this. All the speech, the characters, the descriptions and the actions seem natural and accurate for the situation. No big gestures with no-one acting out of character - this is probably the best fic I have read (and I am not just saying this.) Every aspect of it is brimming with class. Little Webby :-) *now aspiring to be able to write like you!!* |
| Chris 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellently done! It reminds me of 'Butterflied'. |