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| fantoallwritertonone 2007-04-06 ch 11, | abusevery nice great story love it awsome magnificant |
| sodasbabygrl 2006-04-15 ch 5, anon. | abusei like this story its really god plot and everything but mabey next time you could get some one to proff read it because i found some spelling mistakes but it dosent really matter I think its really good some fanfiction I have read have the worst spelling mistakes you did a really good job I like it a lot |
| IHeartJensen 2006-02-25 ch 10, | abuseaw man i love your story uodate soon! |
| Rory J. Lewis 2006-02-18 ch 10, | abuseo sure! a cliffi! why do people always do that? i did it too, its driving my friend insane, but still! anyways lol i like this chappi and ur story so keep going! - rory |
| Duchess4ever 2006-02-18 ch 10, | abuseHey, this was a short chapter, good though. Update soon |
| Maddiecake 2006-02-18 ch 10, | abuse^^ Good jobs, a few spelling mistakes, but it's still good. |
| Maddiecake 2006-02-18 ch 2, | abuseAw! xD |
| TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes 2005-12-05 ch 6, | abusegood job!! update soon!! :)(: |
| CrazyAlchemistgrl017 2005-12-03 ch 5, | abuse^.^ I cant wait for the next chapter! So please update soon! |
| Sodaschick 2005-12-03 ch 5, | abusehope you up-date soon ! |
| TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes 2005-12-02 ch 4, | abusevery good!! update soon!! :)(: |
| horrorpop 2005-11-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseAH! Grammar! You listed names and didn't use comas! Use the ,'s! |
| Sodaschick 2005-11-28 ch 4, | abusehope you up-date soon ! |
| TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes 2005-10-01 ch 3, | abusethis story is so good!! i hope u update like NOW! damn that didnt work lol! update soon!! :)(: |
| sokkazukofan 2005-10-01 ch 3, | abuseaw how sad...HOPE YA UPDATE SON! |