I loved it! I don't actually write myself, but I read much of fanfiction and I can assure jou it was one of the best stories I heve ever read:)

Will you bring in the fact the Yondaime is Naruto's father? I know you said this is sort of AUish, so I was wondering if you're going to have that as something that comes out sooner then it actually did... I guess I could always keep reading -and I will! - to find out, but I wanted to see if I could find out before hand... ^_^ I just had this vision while I was reading this chapter of Kakashi telling Naruto stories of his dad (and possibly what happened to his mother...) and sharing blueberry pancakes with him as he taught Naruto how to make them and telling him they were his dad's recipe... O_O ...I have an active imagination... heh.

Loving this!!

P.S. I'm a SasuNaru shipper, too! They're my OTP, but I like the fact that you won't put another pairing in this story. Besides, their what, 14 in this? They'd only be a distraction.

~Duchess

Although Iruka was a jerk for the majority of the story, I still think this story is awesome! Your Kakashi is ADORABLE! Great work!

i loved it loved it loved it it was awesome you should write more stories like that and iam going to tell me friends all about it.

well, this took me about 5 or 6 hours to read and it was very very well spent!! Its really late so my thoughts are kinda jumbled.. however i really love the way that you have them portrayed in this fic.. its really cool and a nice chane from all the lusty kakairu stuff out there!! I love sasuke in this you really examine all the characters and their inner layers really well... nicely done

oh my effing god...You did an awesome job with this story..seriously i write really crudely so..to be able to have a long story like this and get a ton of reviews..that is fricken amazing.. i dont know how you pull this off..but seriously keep writting!:)

aw this is such a beautifully written story...alhtough the angsty killed me...x__x...but i think it was worth it...because the ending was just beautifully...i am so happy for kakashi...at last iruka is his...^^...and the ending for team 7 was awesome too, especailly sasuke-kun...muhahahaha...he totally deserve it because he was such a know-it-all-prick...^^...thanks for sharing...totally love it!

I really am enjoying this story. You've done really good bjob with it. I just want to make sure that you are aware that you are seriously missusing the world Braille (raised dots that signify letters/ words that allows the sight impared to read.) Or as you type it, brail(a rope used to make hauling a sail in easier.)

I think most everyone that reads the story knows what you mean when you use it though. I just wanted to make sure you knew. As the great niece to a blind couple I'm a little sensitive to the term. ^_^

thanks for sharing you story!

Holy, mother of God.
that...was awesome...*has an emotional break down* I love it so much. Dx *sobs*
GAWD! It's like wham! ** amazing
omg.
I know its been like 2 years since its been complete, but still, i will review. :D
so yeah.
xd
awesome.
:D
<3

I really, really love this story...it's very good :) only one thing kept irritating me - it's "chakra" not "chakara" :/ other than that - I LOVE IT! :)

I love the end, so cute.

Serves them right.

Did the kids do what I think they did to that ramen?

It gave me a nice feeling when Iruka was able to get those assclowns back for blinding him and that he was protecting doing it Kakashi was a bonus.

The dream scene was very well done and cool.