It does seem too easy. I will have to check your lj to see if you have any additionally parts to this story after I completely catch up with your stories. ^_^

Good chapter :)

Very entertaining indeed. That's one form of persuasion, on to the next chapter to see the others :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*shiver* That Lucius Malfoy is a cunning and dangerous man. Even as he tells her that he can exploit her weaknesses...she caves in. I suppose she only would have complied if it was truly her wish as well, but there is something very, very unsettling about his providing that tea.

Lucius is going to eat his final words, but he seems to have worked out most of the situation fairly well. An unhappy, henpecked and ruthless Hermione doesn't seem quite right...

The possibilities indeed. This very calculating Hermione seems to have set up the entire situation, and I'm curious to find out her motives. Anyone who treats Severus that way deserves what she is about to get from Lucius!

Dearest writer,
Again we meet. This is such an un-hermoinish story its almost impossible. I would however like you to finish this lovely little plot as I would like to see if I like it.
Luck,
Kimmi

wow
very well put together it seems

UPDATE SOON!

Ohh is that the end? Tell me it's not the end, I really like this story, and I hope there's more :)

Oh please update really really soon, don't end it there! That would be horrible if you did so UPDATE!
Person Of A Strange Origin or POASO

i like this..please update soon

Excellent!! *applause* I'm not sure if I've mentioned this before, but the plot reminds me just a teensy bit of Sabrina... minus the pregnancy bit. What I like so much about your Lucius/Hermione is Hermione's characterization in particular... she's not a beautiful little flower waiting for the right man to come and pluck her. Oh no, she isn't going to make this easy for anyone. Lucius is devious as always and superbly manipulative. I can't wait for the next update (whenever that will come)!

I can't wait to see where this story will be heading. I love the way you potray Hermione's charector. Allso your fic Falsity is one of my all time favorite stories. Waiting your next update will be torment.

when are you going to update?
i'm a huge hr/lm and even if this isnt a hr/lm i would love it if you updated.

love jessics