you are SO good at writing thes sences! you should've wrote them for the actual show! i wish you did! i totally wish that this actually happened

that was a million-billion-trillion-zillion times better than the real episode! I loved it!

It was so much easier to watch him walk away when she knew he was coming back. because jess always comes back, just when we least expect another seductive town hoodlum to show up, he does. it's ironic isnt it. lol. well keep wrting, i enjoy em.
-chrissy♥

The last line just made that story perfect.

You´re really good at this, you know? All of these are really good, good job :) It´s just really sad that none of this actually happened...but...a girl can dream, eh? Anyways, awesome job! (Jess and Rory are still gonna get together...) Good luck with future stories :D

This was a very good rendition for Nag Hammadi... One of the best I've read.

I really liked the dialogue, and it was very well written. I wish this could've really happened in the show. :)

I really like this I wish it could have gone this way then but maybe it will now, a little bit late too happen but never too late I guess. Looking back what I said makes absoultley no sense but anyway your story was great and very...in Harry Potter fanfic we call it canon I'm not sure what they call it here yet but it fits characters and all that although there's a chance you also write Harry Potter and would know that anyway so I'm just going to shut up now.

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LOVE IT! Ugh! I wish that was how it happened! :( I miss Jess! You did an awesome job with the story! Keep up the good work!

cute. i liked it.

OMG, I absolutely LOVED it! I've probably read practically all of the Nag Hammadi fics on this site and a lot of them are pretty much the same. Good, but still the same. But this one is different. It's really great, you're an amazing writer. I can't wait for your next installment in this series.

~Elisabeth~

keep 'em coming

these one parters are brilliant.

rory and jess are so spot5 on its not funny.

luv ya

satblues

love it make it more than one shot

So good! Oh so good! I adore you for writing this. I absolutely love this series and I hope you'll write many more! This is so perfect. :-)

I (heart) you. Really.

Great interaction. If only this is how it had really gone...*sobs*...I wish you wrote the show!

Just...this was amazing. You're amazing. Everything you write is amazing.

Looking forward to the next one!!

wow. great. amazingly close to the way i still picture nag hammadi happening in my head. great job, very well done!