|Reviews for All Apologies|
| Lise88 8/20/05 . chapter 1
Aww. That was great! I loved it. He still left, but on very much better terms. Nice. I was wondering, do you need ideas for Lit moments to change? If so, how about at the end of Swan Song, when Jess and Rory are kissing, and Jess asks Rory to go somewhere, what if she said 'yes'? I think that is a Lit moment that needs to be changed.
| petitos grasshoppertje 8/20/05 . chapter 1
I loved it!
| Hallon 8/19/05 . chapter 1
You just made me happy again! I had a horrible morning till i read this. It was really good.
I know I haven't reviewed the two other stories in this serie, but I just read them and thought I could do a combined review.
I loved this:
“OK. I’d still like to put notes in your margins.” He said, extending his hand.
Dirty. Rory thought to herself. Cursing herself for the thought, she handed the book to Jess. “OK.”
And Jess never got the mail! And he is going to school for Rory.
And to go back to the story at hand, this was great:
“Do you want to…be stupid together?”
I think that is what made me really happy again. You have to continue writing cute, happy stories.
Ok, I'm stopping now, 'cause otherwise this will be too long! Love the stories!
| Fickle Sobriquet 8/19/05 . chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet. I like these stories you've given us.
| mrs.patrickdrake 8/19/05 . chapter 1
that was awesome i loved it please update