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| Nytel 2005-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseAh, that was so sweet! You did an excellent job of writing it. :) |
| Lattelady 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow! your story takes my breath away. I know there is more I should say, but all that I can think of is that this is a wonderful little gem and I'm so glad I read it. |
| veon 2005-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw |
| EloiseTwo 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThank you for this. A very probable follow up to the scene in "Home." If she'd tell him, it would be like this: the farms, the scars, nothing about Anders, and implied pain. Very well written. Oh, and though thoughts in parenthesis are not supposed to be our concern, they are the true guides of the story. Once again, thanks. |
| crookedpen 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome. totally realistic and well written. |
| adafrog 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI love your story. I can really see Kara doing this if she has to talk to him about what happened. And there is no way she'd mention Anders. Thanks. |
| tomygirl 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI hope you add a part to this story. |