dre4life90 2008-01-09 . chapter 27Wow dude. This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, no lie. It's been on my mind to finish it since I started it a week ago, and I'm actually glad I got to read it in one sitting instead of having to wait for updates :-D. It's crazy though, I started playing RE2 recently, and I'm walking by all these areas and I find myself saying, "Hey...this is where Kenny *insert action*"
I actually liked how you had Kenny do something at the end, earlier in that chapter I was just curious as to why anyone won't trust him, but it's good to know he helped out. There were some other things I wanted to say...but I can't remember them, hahaha, sorry. But seriously man, this was the best fanfiction I've ever, and now I've got someone who has inspired me to do something, thanks. |
The Real Liph 2007-06-26 . chapter 27wow dude wow is all i have to say... |
The Real Liph 2007-06-12 . chapter 6hey dude not done reading your fic gotta stop here but from wat ive read this is phenominal work. i love it dude. the character structure the way u set up the suspense the intruiging backstory of how the stars officers fo to spencer mansion i just love it. i no u already finished it but im going to start reading more of your stories so expect more reviews. thanx for the phenominal work.
Cuz Liph Sux
~The Real Liph~ |
thejadefalcon 2007-02-07 . chapter 1So far I've read Act 4, Act 5 and Act 6. I have to say, they are all brilliant. Unfortunately, I read them in numerical order, so I've been confused about some parts. I understand it as a whole, but you contradict yourself sometimes.
In Act 5, you say that Kenny first met a zombie in the police precinct. According to Act 4, he met them all over the place before he even went to the precinct. Then you say that he'd only seen zombies, when in Act 4, he saw Lickers as well.
I think that's it for a while, except at the end. Kenny meets up with Jack and Lisa and likes them, despite swearing revenge against them in Act 4.
You also make it seem as if Justin died while he was walking about, whereas, in Act 4, he and Sarah charge the zombies until they die. That's all for Act 5.
In Act 6, you make it seem as though Cranky just arrived. I thought Kenny and Cranky spent about a week in the RPD in Act 4 before Cranky left to find Cindy.
Also, in Act 6, Kenny, Billy and Ada are attacked by Jake, and they're not in Act 5.
Apart from these, your fics are absolutely brilliant. I don't know a thing about Street Fighter though, so I can't read those parts of Kenny's life. Hell, I barely know anything about RE either. All I know comes from the movies (which I know are wrong in many aspects) and the books (which I can't remember that well). |
Kouryuu524 2006-07-10 . chapter 26Hey thanks for the mention. Feel free to use any of the characters from my re fict for future re ficts.
Resident Evil Armageddon: |
Metal Harbinger 2006-06-27 . chapter 25That was an awesome way to end the fic man, a battle of all battles that has been pretty massive compared to all your other fics. I feel you captured all of the characters greatly and really showed how they should be used when you play them in the games, and the O.C.'s were captured nicely of course. ;-)
You really hyped the possible major battle towards the end and I must say in the end it truly proved to be worth it. You are now nearing the ending stretch for "Return to Shadows" and hopefully that will turn out just as good. Keep up the good work and congrats on a job well done. |
dIvInE SeReNiTy 2006-06-23 . chapter 25Damn...this is one heck of a finish to a superb piece of writing...
Man, the way u built up the atmosphere in this story was almost indescribable in words...loved almost everything which this story had to offer, from its very beginning to its end.
Damn!! Great job!! Great job! |
Kouryuu524 2006-06-23 . chapter 25great ending to a great story. i like how everything in this leads to the origional act 5. |
Lakeem 2006-05-29 . chapter 24 my name is lakeem and ima huge RE fan (like the rest of u) and this 1being the 1st 1 i read so far is just simply the ** (excuse the langauge) and iwant 2 tell u that this summer ima try 2 make a movie based on a fanfic im workin on similar 2 RE 1 ima also have info in da future |
Loki 7000 2006-04-25 . chapter 24Another great chapter to an already great story. Can't wait to the finale. |
Metal Harbinger 2006-04-21 . chapter 24Alright, you've got all the survivors here now, now things are going to get cool. :-)
That was some interesting interaction between all of the survivors and you captured their distinctive individual personalities, as well as explaining how they should be used.
It's gonna be a badass final battle for sure. |
Kouryuu524 2006-04-21 . chapter 24Great chapter. Question is this the last one? |
Loki 7000 2006-04-07 . chapter 1Excellent story. Your attention to detail and the way you incoporated the original and establisehd characters together were phenomenal. You didn't just play the Resident Evil games, you studies them from corner to corner and inside out. Keep up the good work! |
Hyperactive Hamster Of Doom 2006-04-04 . chapter 23Damn it, ate my review and now I have to start over. *scowls*
Loved the cafeteria scene, that was really unsettling. I still feel sorry for Ace; nobody deserves to go like that. The fateful phone call from Justin and Sarah was desperately sad and very poignant... I can't blame Kenny for freaking out after having to go through something like that. Just lucky for him that Jake managed to get him out of those handcuffs again, huh?
Kenny's bitterness and fury with Lisa and Jack for having survived when everyone else at that party died was understandable, given the circumstances, not least because he arrived at that judgment without knowing the whole story. It's a testament to the skill of your writing that I still managed to feel sorry for him even when he was swearing revenge against my own OCs... very nicely done.
Amber's escape and rendezvous with Jack and Lisa was a little too quick and easy, but then I haven't written that part of Double Amber yet, so don't feel bad about that.
A couple of minor quibbles - a slight misspelling of Charlotte's last name, and the fact that Lisa was meant to be driving the car, not Jack - but otherwise, no real complaints. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm looking forward to the final installment. :D
HHOD :) |
Metal Harbinger 2006-04-02 . chapter 23Dude, that was totally awesome how you described the cafeteria massacre from Kenny's perspective. Almost made me think of what it would be like to describe it from every single person present's standpoint.
I so felt for Kenny in the scene where he had to listen to Justin and Sarah be torn apart. You captured his emotion vividly and the way he wanted to lash out at the world and his struggles with David described the way I'm sure a lot of people would feel if their loved ones were ripped apart by zombies. Also a somewhat interesting perspective on how you described the politics of RCSS and all the B.S. that went down, makes you relive the drama of high school all over again.
That was some cool interaction between Kenny and Jake too, even though if it was a bit brief, but still great to see the OC's interacting.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Anxiously awaiting the epic final battle! |
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