i really like your characterizations! so far so good!

i really loved the idea of the main setting of your story. to be frank i thought it would be kind of stupid but it was surprisingly very well written! can't wait to read more of your stuff :)

it's a really cute story

That was so cute and funny! Write a sequel...I want them to get together so bad! This is one of the first stories I've read that have good realistic characterizations...continue it!

this is one of the wittiest stories i've read about lily and james. and its funny too. great job.

Extremely well written and very imaginiative! I really enjoyed reading this story and think the personification of the couch was an excellent plot! Keep it Up!

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This is such a cute little story! I really liked it. Very sweet ending.

I very much like your version of the Whomping Willow incident. I like all the dynamics it creates with the character's relationships.

I love your writing! I finished Wizarding Betrothal last night and am really enjoying this one now. I think it's hysterical the little digs you make at all the James/Lily cliches. I totally agree with all your counterpoints! I think you right the characters so well. It's convincing.

it was soo good but i can't believe they dont get together...i think that is why this story isnt as popular as wizard betrothol...sequel?!

you were right, this story was more in depth with their emothions and it was more concentrated with the relationships with each other. you didnt need to ask how you did at the end of every chapter, seeing as it is how you portray things, and if people dot llike it, tough, they can deal with it.
with wizarding betrothal, it was undeniably cute and all with the fluff, but it wasnt as profound as toads..=]
xx

it's impressive and nice and exciting, the ending and all.. but I think its a bit screwed up too much with details, well, some paragraphs are unnecessary and boring to read, but there's not too many of them anyway! still, maybe you'd consider this.
IT'S COOL, man, its pretty awesome.

This story is really funny, and realy good. I enjoyed it a lot.

aw that was so good! i thought that the character development was really really great. i loved how you portrayed lily because thats exactly how i imagined her and it was really great! awesome job!!

hey, i think this is a good story and i love the idea of the narrator being the red couch, the only thing with that though is that the scenes between james and lily are really limited, i mean, i would have LOVED to see the scene when lily had to feed james or something like that. and i like all the dialogue cuz its funny but sometimes its a little too much to me... all in all though i think it is a really great story and that the characters are very natural and act in a way that is plausible and really does the characters justice. i also loved seeing this quirky side of remus, i love the whole shy guy idea but this is really funny. keep up the great work! you are a great author and i love all your stories!