Well, that certainly is interesting. Very creative. Are you planning on continuing this eventually?

Yee! Ya updated on muh birthday!

Just so you know, you can put smex on You jsut have to rate the story M for mature, and put an extra warning in the first chapter. I'm kinda telling you this because I wanna see the smex without having to go to another website. / I'm such a sick-minded person...

Looking forward to reading more!

O... CUTE, really wrong, but CUTE! Great details, and the story went rather smooth, but WHY DID YOU LEAVE THE CLIFF HANGER? K, sorry... good luck with the next chapter, but don't make it TOO bad, OK. I don't want to have nightmares. (What? Twelve year old girls can't have nightmares about 2D turning into a girl and, erm, seducing Muds?)

Kylie (Phoenex360)

VERY interesting story.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

-Angel

This story is teh best! Iloved how you ended the chapter, but you have to keep writing, you have to resolve the problem! I love teh Murdoc/2D pairing though! :-)

Naive 2D. I just love this chapter. Can't wait for more.

WOW this is good i hope to see more stories from you!

oh oh oh!

i love this!

it's so damn original!

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(it made me laugh many many times!)

please continue!

-DRC

i like this story, you should write more chapters

Very creative twist on the 2D/Murdoch idea (assuming where this is going), and the characters thus far have been believable. Plus you understand proper English, which makes the story much easier to understand, that's sadly rare in many fanfics!

In summary, for the love of GAWD, please continue. It's a rare instance where a humor fic isn't gradingly annoying and is actually amusing. It makes the masses sad to think that this would just be dropped.

PLEASE write more this is a good dtory!

:O PDATE! PLEASE!

PLEASE CONTINUE! ;-;