Ok, my earlier comments were a little off, seeing as i hadn't read it all, which i have now. I still kinda think their relationship started a bit fast and the story was a little cliche. Sorry this all does sound really mean and i hope you don't think of it as mean, it was a really good story. Might want to check a little of your spelling too, but otherwise really good!

Yellow Neon
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I know i have not yet read all of it, which i will do. I would just like to say though from this point, i have a few points of costuctive critism.

1. her relationship with Galahad was a bit fast? Maybe it was supposed to be, it just seems a bit too fast.

2. it is a little boring as it keeps to the film like law, not really having anything else differant happening apart from an added character

3. maybe you want to explain her character in full a little more, it is a little vauge.

Apart from all that, i love it and maybe you might want to make it more clear in the early chapters as i am sure the things i pointed out will be explained later on.

Yellow Neon
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Horrible. I couldn't even get past chapter three. Your OC is a whore. She just meets Galahad, then she decides to have sex with him straight away? Great plot there. Your story looked good...until I got to the second paragraph.

OMG! I LOVED YOUR STORY! Galahad's awesome!

You know...this is an awesome story. I usually only read LanceOc's and TristanOC's but this was jsut awesome. Siply awesome. I'm rambling aren't eye?*lbushes in emarresment* It was sad to read the Lancelot died, but it was nice to know that someone did love him. Great job!

~hannah~

NO! *tears* *sniff* *sniff* poor dag =( ! anyways good stuff not happy but good

yea! ceri and gwen are friends!

i really like the brotherly and sisterly stuff you have going on between them it is really fun

aw this story is so cute i'm really enjoying it!

lol i'm liking this so far

Ceri just met Galahad and she suddenly she's in the bed with him, getting knocked up? Can you [RELATIONSHIP PLOT HOLE?] Oh well, you kept true to the movie at least (Aruth and Gweny getting busy in the bed near the end of the movie, true). I mean no offense, but I was really expecting this to be a majorly different OC-oriented fanficion. The brief Lancelot/Ceri moment was enough to convince me of that at least, and as I read on, "Ceridwen" began to remind me of every other OC-oridented story I've read (but at least Ceri isn't is loud and roudy, cursing every other minute.

It was fun while it lasted
Sakura123

Great updates!! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a couple chapters. *hangs head in shame*

I'm sad to see this end as I really have loved it, but you did a very good job with it!

Poor Ceri, what a dillema she was faced with. . I cannot believe Guinevere would even ask something like that! It's for the best that they are moving away though, and they will have their very own estate? Lucky them, hehe.

Well, you've done a fantastic job on this, I hope you write another KA fic someday! If you do, I'll definately read it!

MWP

I don't get it! How could such an AWESOME story have only 15 reviews? I LOVE this story so much, keep up the good work. I feel bad for Guinevere, but how could someone ask that of a friend? I don't think Ceridwen could do it. Well, excellent chapter, and please plase update asap!

The baby sounds so cute! I like it that you named the baby boy Lancelot. I can't wait until Gawain gets married and has a child! I truely hope Arthur and Guinevere find somehow to get a child! I hope there will be more chapters coming out soon!

*squeals with excitement* I am vibrating with happiness right now!

I LOVE IT! I was so very happy to see the alert that there was another update on this!

It was such a perfect chapter, too!! The wedding was beautiful. . and now Ceri is having a baby??! YAY!

Sorry, I'm just so very excited!! I am totally in love with this story!! *smiles* I'm going to be smiling all night now!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

:D