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Reviews For: A Piece of Her Soul
my-echo 2007-04-04 . chapter 1
The largest thought I had whilst finishing this, keeping in mind your other stories written along the same lines, was, "Oh. That explains a lot."

Beautiful and poetic, as always. My favorite phrase, for some reason, was "his big rough hand"...probably because I've never really seen a more perfect yet simple description of that particular part of Gerik's anatomy.

I love the idea of her putting a piece of her soul into the ring. It fits with all the slightly unreal yet wonderfully appealing ideas you've put forth in some of your other works, much like the ethereal beings in The Man In The Boat.

Awestruck as always,
~Echo
phantom-jedi1 2006-12-05 . chapter 1
A nice vignette. I fear I haven't much to say, the simplicity and beauty of Christine's decision taking my words away...

phantom_jedi
ghostwritten2 2006-02-28 . chapter 1
Your stories always give me goosebumps. Wonderfully done, as always.
Priestess Adularia 2005-11-16 . chapter 1
*Claps*
Trier1974 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
Lovely bit. Interesting to read her thoughts in that last touching scene. Great job.
cyranothe2nd 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Willing a peice of her soul to keep him safe...what a lovely and thought-provoking way to end it.
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