Good concept, though it could use more detail in my opinion.

Um... I think you missed one big thing: the battle of Kirby against Waddle Doo. By the way, I think the next mini-movie is when Kirby, Ribbon and Waddle Dee visits this artist (I can't remember what's her name though)and then she transforms into more scarier and creepier. Gee, later on if I could remember there's this level that really gives me the heebie-jeebies in Ripple Star. I think it's after the first level. I think the next mini-movie is called Art Attack, am I right? Anyways, please carry on with this! :)

UGTH! WEIRD! STRANGE VERSION OF THE CRYSTAL SHARDS!!
O well, the next is waddle- dee then the artist then the peguin dude...

I personally can't imagine Kirby admitting that he overeats.

Yes, the next mini-movie is Waddle Dee/Doo. Do not ruin it for me, or I shall be very unhappy. Do try to capture the comic essence of the scene.

Nit-picky stuff aside, this looks a lot better than the other 3-4 Kirby 64 adaptions I've read on FanFiction, and I hope that it continues to get better. (Quick plug: I'm currently writing a story called antimatter; review it or die)

Considering that there aren't too many cutscenes in the movie, I'd be interested to see if/how you handle the variety of levels/stages in the game (word of advice: don't skim over them).

And update more often than monthly. Tommorrow would be nice (please?).

I think the next mini-movie is Waddle Doo. I can't remember that far back though. Um... when do we chat at funkypool? I found this new site on Google called Playthem. I'll tell you the address of that site when I'll e-mail you.

Yay! I like the movie where Kirby imagines his friends are food!

Well... I'll be a little harsh but well... it lacks detail. In fact, the story is just plain lacking.

It's not becease the cinematic movies in the games are short that you must have paper-thin descriptions!

How did Ribbon felt when she saw the darkness? Who did she rescue? What did this person looked like? Almost nothing was described!

Anyway... I'm done rambling.

Have a nice day.

Hey! I remember seeing this mini-movie! I haven't played this game for ages! :) It's a good chapter so far so please update soon! ^_^ Um... I already got my account on funkypool. When do we chat again? I'm called rainbowstar on