That's it? You should totally expand on this! You've really got something here!

Lots of possibilities. It was a good begining and I look forward to more chapters.

Good, very good... Gives a more humoristic side to the Thin Man...

i love the thin man *crispin glover* in real life but hes my favorite please write more about him or continue this story which is good.

coolness. i think i prefer dylans bad boys (i have a habit of falling for them 2) but the thin man was kool.

Hi that was a good start but why stop. Please start up again

This is a great beginning. :) I am very entertained by how you write his thought process. Nice work!

tres tres funny. and sweet.

Yeh, this is a good start, please keep going, coz i really luv charlie's angels fanfics n nobody writes any more, i promise i will keep on reviewing if u continue. Cheers Bec :)

It's really good so far... i especially like the "mental list" he goes through. Please continue, there are never many updates on this section.