 Alyssa-Stone 2009-09-01 . chapter 1I loved the prequel to this, and actually read this ages ago- only recently decided to create my own account!
Your work is fantastic, and I was gutted when I realised this was unfinished- and have been checking back every few months ;p
Please finish this, you are so talented, and I would LOVE to hear the end of this! |
 laraandkurtisfan97 2009-06-30 . chapter 4Love the story
Good thinking putting a kid in their as a friend for Bryce
Keep writing |
 brainfear 2009-05-10 . chapter 12Good! But more Kurtis/Lara action like last chapter's! Oh my my my! |
 kapz3911 2009-04-18 . chapter 12 OMG LUV THIS STORY! i've read loads of lara and kurtis fanfics but this is ma fave over all of them XD PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ DO ANOTHER CHAPPY! PLEASE! |
 nhragurl 2009-03-24 . chapter 1More more MORE!
I read all 12 chapters in one day, I'm so sad to see you haven't updated in two years :(
We need more!! Please update! You'd make yourself one really happy fan base!! Haha. |
 Sian :) 2009-01-24 . chapter 12 Wow! I love this story :) but i wanna know what happens next... I'll just have to wait patiently... If that's possible for me :p |
 FFCritic 2008-11-22 . chapter 1 This fic sucks and so do you |
 open hearts catch dreams 2008-07-24 . chapter 12No, no, no, no...No! Just no!
There's no more! (but you already knew that)
I know that your profile page says you can't really get into Tomb Raider fics at the minute, but I don't know when you said that. I am begging you - update this fic! I do really love this story (more than I thought I would) I was a little worried Kurtis and Lara would be more...'on the same side'. Thankfully, their arguments are as often and amusing as ever.
I like Alessa - like I mentioned, I haven't played TR AoD - so I assume she's an OC. I love the way that you show her abilities manifesting in times of fear, like the shaking vases.
I am actually sad I've read all your Tomb Raider fics. I'll have to find others now. :(
Please, please update! |
 -Pretty.Pretty.Butterfly- 2008-07-15 . chapter 12oh! loved the chappies! I know it's been ages but could you pleze update? =) |
 MaroonGoddess 2008-06-07 . chapter 12Ahhrg! What a great story!
I've been reading This is Business and The Light of Truth nonstop for the past two weeks now and now an abrupt stop!
This is such a great story, I really think you should consider finishing it! |
 mamesikokua 2008-05-16 . chapter 12ahh, please update! i am going crazy, this is my absolute favorite fan fiction!! have a little pity on us poor reader! |
 Covered Clouds 2008-05-14 . chapter 12Decided to go through and reread this and its prequel in the event a new chapter was coming along soon... hint hint. No pressure though; no sense in forcing it!
Again, you have a rather lovely style, plot, character development... you're basically just on a role. Keep it up.
Cheers!
-CC |
 Deruptus Ac Fragmentum 2008-04-07 . chapter 1PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! I read This is Business as well I loved that too! Can NOT wait for the next chapter . I meant that literally by the way (squirms in seat, unable to sit still) =D, once more : PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS! |
 mamesikokua 2008-03-16 . chapter 1oh how i love this story! your writing is amazing, you've really got the characters down! |
 angillentine 2008-03-16 . chapter 12 MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. . . MORE. . . MORE! |