*Rebelchic17* 2005-12-29 . chapter 7 wow just read your whole stroy from begining to end. really enjoyed it good job! ^_^ |
Trekkie Lizard 2005-09-24 . chapter 7Great story! The end was real good too. |
Greywolf Lupous 2005-09-21 . chapter 7Oh this story rocks, you rock! Been scouring for some good Dukes reading and just found this tonight. Needless to say I gobbled the whole thing up in one sitting. Everyone was perfectly in character (and I love that song, so nice title too :), and you managed to whump both of the boys. Poor Sam Avery, but I guess if I had to decide between him or the boys, well...
According to your profile you've got another one in the works? Oh goody! I've got you on my alert list so I know whenever you post. Keep up the good work! |
Ashti 2005-09-19 . chapter 7Yay! You finished the story :D
I'm glad to see our cousins three got out of it alive. Shame that Avery had to die, but you can't win 'em all, and I suppose it does fit with the song you named this after.
I have to admit I got a kick out of that "Little Sister" line in the sixth chapter. :D I must've not been very awake when I read the prior chapters, cause I was wondering at that Little Sister bit all the time. It just sounded so.. off.. And then this rolls around and I'm like "D'OH, of COURSE."
Marvelously well done :) |
Kumori Fushichou 2005-09-16 . chapter 7Very good. |
Ishie 2005-09-10 . chapter 7OH, this was fantastic! I love introspective!Luke and hope to see more of him in the future. You did a really great job with Uncle Jesse's voice at the end, too. Denver Pyle was totally saying those words in my head. The level of research you did came across very strongly - kudos on the realism of the whole piece. I am *definitely* waiting for more from you, whether it's DoH or something else! |
Jordyn D. 2005-09-10 . chapter 7 I really liked this story. Good job. |
DixieDavenport 2005-09-09 . chapter 7Great story! |
ackeberlynn 2005-09-09 . chapter 7 That was a great ending! I'm looking forward to more of your stories. |
jduke 2005-09-09 . chapter 7I really like the story. You are an alsome writer. I can't wait to read more of what you write. |
Candylovin Fehrian 2005-09-09 . chapter 7Ah, I love this story. Too bad it's already over... Are you writing more duke story's?? |
GreggoAddict 2005-09-08 . chapter 7i really enjoyed this story. Glad everyone is alright! you did a good job!
Love
Jackie |
Ishie 2005-09-07 . chapter 6Ooh, I quite like this. You've got the voices of the three Dukes nailed. Interesting twists with the DEA and the Sheriff's involvement. I can totally see this as an episode.
I was hoping for more "Balladeer"-type interruptions, but maybe that would interrupt the flow of the story too much? As it is, this plays out as a more modern-day Dukes story (though not, thank God, like a modern-day movie version!)
I've rec'd you on my LJ fic journal. Hope to see more from you! |
ViprKlr 2005-09-07 . chapter 6 Really good story. So sad Sam died though! |
GreggoAddict 2005-09-07 . chapter 6Great Story. Glad there's going to be one more chapter. I really enjoyed this story, everytime I get on, I check tosee if it's updated. i Love Bo, so glad he's okay and of course Luke and even Sam. Keep it up!
Love
Jackie |