this is so good! omg! this'll be funny! one question tho...why does draco want to get a detention? is he interested in gin?

Sounsd like you copied 'A lonely september'to the extreme..

If you want a beta, I'm here for you. Good story though, I like it. Not entirely original, but nothing really is. Question, was this posted twice? It seemed like there was another one similar further up that I didn't read... Any hoo, update soon.

-Elvira