Inspired! I love it. Cute, short, and to the point. I could actually picture Hodges fake gagging in the checkout line.

Poor invisible David. Having Nick notice you might make up for it though.

that was great! :~)

haha wow if i were behind them in that line i would have told the woman to shut up. haha and woo that was cute at the end!

Exhausting to write? Maybe... Completely Worth it? HELL YES! You captured both characters perfectly...that was really good. And thanks for your reviews!

LOL This was good.

That was great. For some reason after the season finalie I've been lusting after Nick/Hodges slash!

It may have been exhausting to write, but from my POV, totally worth it! That was hilarious. Excellent job getting in David's head and imitating his tone!
Thanks for sharing this great funny story!

do you know how much i just can't stand slash? mainly because it's always hideously out of character. i now take it all back. Review1234 linked me to this, announcing it to be The Only In-Character slash fiction ever to have graced the site and she was right. It was really, really great. Excellent work. And hilarious! I can't pick out my favourite bit but I'd have to go with every single line Hodges thought in between the exchange between nick and the check-out girl. Brilliant stuff. Excellent work. Very, very well done.

That was so sweet(just like our Nicky) and you captured Hodges beautifuly.More soon please.Hugs and stuff Lou:)

P.S. "I see you"-so sweet,so tender-so very good.

Wow, I usually don't read slash, but, seriously, I'm glad I read this. Hodges is too funny, especially his comments about Alicia. I'd have to agree with him there. And... Gasp! They're in-character! Oh my... You're really good. And funny. Anyway, I thank you for writing- and keeping them in-character- and I hope you continue to write as well as you do now.

That was great! I tend to read your stuff on LJ, but dind't see this posted there. God, your David is so freaking wonderful, funny, observant, snarky...I adored his view of the hated wal-mart, Nick is so..well very Nick in this.

Oblvious sometimes to a fault.

Kristen

Yay! Snarky Hodges hiding his pain while lusting for Nick is perfect for a lazy Sunday afternoon.

This story is just the kind I look for - intelligent snapshots of everyday life of a hot CSSI ;)

Thank you for sharing this.

*giggles* Hodges POV was perfect. Couldn't have written him any better myself.

I love your stories! Some make me laugh. Or make me sad. But overall, they're awesome!

ctx :D

i love you.. haha
we need to get married so you can write me hodges/nick all day long.. XD
you write him so well ..