wow, a few connections in this chapter that I thought were interesting.

1- the date in the diary 8/25/91, that would be a day before i was born, seeing as i was born 8/26/91. thought that was interesting.

2- ha ha you used your real name for the name of that girl, Gerleen. though i don't really get who she is and how she fits into everything. i thought Alyssa was Remus's daughter? ah well this is a good story, looking forward to update on this as well as Millenium War!

Sam

OMG HE KILLED HIS WIFE!...He had a wife? Ah well, ya learn new things everyday. Wow you must really be into the whole Mauderer's thing, Sirius, Lupin, must be the rping. lol looking forward to that update on Millenium War.

:) Good chappie. I can't wait to see what happens next. :D

*sniffle* *tear* *cry* I'm a sap. Sorry again for being slow on editing.

Omg! You're doing this to get back at me formy evil cliff-hangers! lol, good job. Yes, I probably deserve it. Speaking of which, I STILL have yet to work on chapter three. ;; I'll get back to that. Can't wait for the next chapter. :P

I've already read this considering I'm your editor but...

BUM BUM BUM! heehee

Sounds good. I hope you update soon.