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Toby Mcgreave 2008-07-01 . chapter 1
This was really good :3 My only dislike is the lack of graphic sex scenes. If you need advice of more graphic sex scenes, I'm the 'Sex scene' Guru ;P hehe Great story otherwise, Ed realy does hate milk XD
YukinoKara 2008-06-04 . chapter 1
lol, nice story; u should be happy about it; not disgusted :D
Wolfy 2008-04-29 . chapter 1
^^ Funny story but a bit rushed.
minnikat6 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
so Kawii i love it
xXX Bishiman Sephiroth XXx 2007-01-27 . chapter 1
haha funny ^__^
minnikat6 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
great but can you email me with what taisa means i'd really appreciate it my emails
Shquig 2006-12-01 . chapter 1
“Hmm…well, the milk that comes from a cow tastes like crap, the milk that comes from a human tastes like crap…” At Roy’s skeptical look, he finally added, “However, milk that comes from a perverted colonel suits me just fine.”
X3
Frozen_taho 2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Ah, lemon-flavored milk, my favorite kind.

Oh, and its Greg Focker.
Raven the Joker 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
Heheh, Roy really is a sick bastard...XD
And please do the sequel, wanna read it!!
Fullmetal Guitarist 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
To be honest, your lemon pretty much sucks. You need to get into it more when you're writing, make it flow, describe every second of the sex in perverted detail.
Lover of Angelus 2006-03-12 . chapter 1
That was the most entertainment I've had all day (and that's saying a lot!!)
KeraJeir 2006-03-12 . chapter 1
That was artistry
silver fox aka vash 2006-01-28 . chapter 1
ahaha funny **
ArisaWeasley 2005-12-31 . chapter 1
xD Nice Katie...Nice. -snickers-
I need to read more RoyxEd fics, don't I? Might come in useful later. xD
By the way...the side of my face is still numb. I have reason to believe you were using the auto-mail arm. >>
-Jill
unknown 2005-12-24 . chapter 1
ok i found the movie thing a bit odd but hey if it truns you then so be it. over all the story was pretty good. write some more. you should go for a sad/love story next time.
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