Ha.. i liked it.. very Rai.. nice work xx

Lovely.

The ending actually shocked me, hence the review.

Marvelous job.

-SKies

That sounds about right for a butterfly, but um..was it Ren's or Rai's POV? I think it said it was an unsettling look about Rai. Right? It was good though so like don't think I'm saying it ain't or something. :)

Very nice! Kind of subtly creepy. xD My review doesn't do it justice... Oh well. ._. I love the story, none the less.

God, I love your one-shot! Such image-spoken words and desription inside it! I just had to read it more then once and I could just see the scene you had wrote in my head as I kept reading it. If I had to rate this from 1-10, I'd say that this story would be a 40!

Ouch! Well described, and it does fit, in a way, especially with Vol.3

Ooh, very good. Normally, I might gripe about the length, but this was much better short. I love the last line. Could this be a metaphoric butterfly?

Avi-chan

*meeps*

The butterfly reminds me of Ren. Was that deliberate?

*meeps again and hides from Rai*