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| shivaa87 2008-07-12 ch 10, | abusewonderful |
| nimath 2008-07-02 ch 10, | abuseGreat story. After I read your author's notes at the end of the story I was really surprised to see how many "cliches" you said you had used. They were so well written and believable and incorporated so well into the story that I didn't even notice that they could be considered cliches. Thanks for the story! |
| Harriverse 2008-06-23 ch 10, anon. | abuseAnother great story enjoyed. My, you certainly know how to construct a great story! |
| Wind of Freedom 2008-06-18 ch 8, | abuseI guess we are actually grateful for your 'adding a few thousands more words to the story' as you put it *grin* I'm actually re-reading it and love it dearly, Merlin help me! Great story! |
| nilaglar 2008-06-15 ch 10, | abuseFor me, your characters ARE "realistic and plausible". You did nice piece of work, shall I say. Wish you more inspirations for such stories;) |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 10, | abuseI loved this story. This is definitely a must read for all SSHGers and will be going into my favorites. Thank you for writing it. I stayed up until 6:00AM reading it and it was more than worth every hour of lost sleep. I just loved it. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseSquee. I loved their declarations. For them, it was perfect. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abuseSo close and yet so far away... *clicks to next chapter* |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 7, | abuseYAY they realize that they want each other as more than just friends. But then they had to go and get all angsty and introspective. Hee. This is just going to make the eventually coming together all the more better. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseI love this. I really do. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 5, | abuseThe interrogatins of Snape and Hermione were really quite interesting. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 4, | abuseIt is wonderful to see the trust that they both have in one another. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 3, | abuseI liked the visit with Draco. Hopefully that will help make Snape believe that there are people out there that think he is worth saving. It was nice to see Snape return the favor of waking Hermione from a nightmare and the fact that he even joked about his condition in the potions lab just goes to show that he really is getting better. Despite his best efforts to the contrary. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abuseHa. He locked her out. The scene during the fevered nightmare was very touching. |
| RenitaLeandra 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI love the strength of Hermione's conviction in helping Snape and Winky is such a refreshing change for a house-elf. She's got a spine, and she'll need it dealing with Snape. |