 Don 2009-01-30 . chapter 10 Wow, getting better and better. |
 Don 2009-01-30 . chapter 6 I think that the best person to match with Harry is Draco and I am very glad that you did.
Love this story so far and am sure will love the remainder of it.
Don |
 shawn 2008-08-13 . chapter 41 well after a week, i finished all 41 chapters and this is really one of the best fanfic i've (and i read a lot). the only negative i can find is that i'm a bit confused about the plot of the story. i mean, is the story about defeating voldermort or about the relationship with black/snape/mckinnon. also you kinda loose the tension that occurs with the interaction with these 3 when the scene gets too long or too often.
but i do love what you've done with the cain/kerstan characters. i mean i have no clue what these characters are about and that's just awesome!! also glad to see you wrote a harry/draco pairing. really good decision since it's much more interesting how a domineering draco works out a relationship with harry without suffocating him. anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, and once again, great job!! |
 Elbereth 16 2007-06-03 . chapter 41wow, this is an amazing story. I've been reading it over the last month, and now i realize its been over a year since you last updated. With experience with my own stories i know this usually means a premature end of a story. But PLEASE update! You've written too much to stop now! |
 notwritten 2006-08-11 . chapter 41This a good story. Please update! |
 Deannit 2006-07-06 . chapter 41Well... Captivating enough to make me read all 41 chapters. I'll have to keep an eye on this one now, to see how it all ends! |
 Blue Skies Rusty 2006-03-24 . chapter 41If I wasn't so completely and madly in love with him, I would cheat on my boyfriend with your fic. That's how amazing it is. How one has a love affair with a fanfic is beyond me but it's the thought that counts, right?
Anyway, I get a feeling that Kerstan is an evil little thing. I don't know why. Just a feeling. I want to say he's the one that let the DE's in but I kinda doubt it. Hm... Maybe he's pulling a Barty Crouch Jr. and is actually a Death Eater in disguise. I'm grasping at straws of course. The poor boy is probably completely innocent. Or is he? I think the fact that he block Severus is extremely suspicous... I don't find it as suspicous for Cain who actually seems like a good kid. Maybe he's not so suspicous because his father was a Death Eater and might have taught Occlumency or whatever to keep him from accidentally spilling deep, dark Death Eating secrets.
Enough with speculation. Your story is wonderful (One of the few I read religiously... actually I've lost touch with ffn so I'm going to have to say this is probably the only fic I read anymore WHEN IT'S UPDATED -HINT, HINT!)
Keep up the good work. As McDonald's (ew!) would say, "I'm lovin' it!" |
 tish 2006-03-21 . chapter 41 hi i dont mean to be annoying but are you going to update soon? i really miss reading this story. i know that life can be crazy . i am waiting patiently for you to update so please dont make me wait forevr. this is my favourite story, no lie
waiting patiently
tish
p.s. keep up the good work |
 Brutal Moonshine 2006-03-04 . chapter 41damn you and suspense thsi is GOOD please wrtie more
~Al |
 AcceleratedGlass 2006-03-04 . chapter 41good chapter update soon |
 Put the Fun in Dysfunctional 2006-03-03 . chapter 41Wow. great it is okay for the wait I am just glad to know you are still going on with the story. |
 connerblack 2006-03-03 . chapter 41Yay! You're back!! I have so missed my regular dose of this story...
Great chapter! Love how you put Sirius and Severus working together... :)
Keep up the good work! |
 tish 2006-02-24 . chapter 40 hey, i know that these are annoying but would you mind putting the next chapter up. iam DYING to know snapes memery. it should be shoking and private though..well till next ch!
tish |
 Put the Fun in Dysfunctional 2006-01-28 . chapter 40Hey another great chapter. Can't wait to find out what his memory was though I have an idea. |
 Rosvixen 2006-01-28 . chapter 40Sorry you're not getting as many reviews as this deserves. I've really enjoed the last two chapters, and am very much loking forward to seeing what Sevvie's memory is! |