This needs a spell-check and proofreading, but it was beautiful.

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Stellar! Excellent poem. It's so touching that I almost cried (I would actually have cried if I hadn't been reading it in keyboarding class *wink wink*. I love it so much I just want to hug you...unless you're a guy, in which case you get a freindly handshake.

awesom! the poem is beautiful, and everyone is in character perfectly. Very mooving, good job

wow...this is very good it mayde me cry and i happy about that because i'm not sure why i'm just glad your a very good right you need to right more thou :) keep up the good work

That was one of the greatest poems! I didn't think you wrote it until I got to the part about Gaz. Shockingly good. Shocking.

1 word: BEAUTIFUL. I loved it so much I cried. You sure know how to write this stuff well. I mean if I cry then obviosly it kicks major butt. This is going on my favorites.

-Spicer's Apple-

WHY!?!?!?!!?!?!? WHY?!?!?! I LOVE U ZIM!
oh btw its good! ^_^0 lol hehe