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Nameless 10/4/05 . chapter 1
Finally! -smacks Snape upside the head- -roll eyes- Moron...

-cough- I'm good.

I really like the personality and story in this one - as usual - as well as the writing. It really is amazing!

Heh heh.. I like Airelle a lot - and Snape, for the time being... (just don't do anything stupid again... gr.)

-salute- Great fic as per usual!
Stefynae 7/25/03 . chapter 1
Wonderful next installment! Sorry it's been awhile, I've been working on my own stories, and a new POTC story...

This was great. So much action and it seemed really real (if that makes sense). You have a good sense of SHOWING readers the story, instead of just TELLING.

The last portion was awesome, the whole story could have really been the reason why he came back.

Congrats on a job well-done.

Stefynae
troesnaja 1/4/03 . chapter 1
AHAHAHH you think THAT was the last straw but you just knew that Voldie couldn't win that the aurors were too strong you COWARD! I really like Vilka Omar would be good for her i guess why do they callher miss? ok so in some stories Snape is okie somewhat but not here well hope wishes will explain some more of their feelings and emotions background interaction with other ppl character development etc etc...
Monitor 11/24/02 . chapter 1
Wonderful! enough said
Bohemian Storm 8/21/02 . chapter 1
Once again, I have goosebumps from your ending. :)
Gedia Kacela 8/15/02 . chapter 1
Oooh, VERY nice. His friendship/care for her was the last straw, eh? A nice twist at the end, though I saw it coming.

I loved the fight scene- it seemed as if I was there, fighting alongside the Aurors... or the Death Eaters... hehehe!
Courtney-Christina 11/21/01 . chapter 1
Heh, Sev cannot stay away... awe! Does She know it was him? KEEP WRITING!
Twix 11/18/01 . chapter 1
Ooo! Love the ending!
Morgan Le Fay Of Avalon 11/1/01 . chapter 1
I love it! Great Snape fic! Nice twist at the end. It was the perfect way to pull him out of his Death Eater state, making him face killinghis best friend! Nice one! I'm going to read the sequal soon. Bye for now.
Mrs. Scower 8/24/01 . chapter 1
love it! gonna read them all!
The Song Thrush 7/20/01 . chapter 1
Is there a sequel to this? I love it!
PepsiAngel 7/17/01 . chapter 1
This was really good! I knew the death eater was Snape already but it was still awesome. :D Great work! Another favorite of mine.
lupinlover 7/13/01 . chapter 1
Very nice. I liked it.
Sarah Black 5/30/01 . chapter 1
WOW MORE MORE I WANT MORE!
Blotts 5/26/01 . chapter 1
kool! Great Story!
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