|Reviews for The Legacy|
| PhoenixRe 4/28/11 . chapter 27
Great story. It's a shame there isn't much multi-chaptered stories for EE out there but yours was fantastic and I really enjoyed it. I may or may not read the sequel - I try to avoid incomplete stories because if I like it a lot then I am left wondering and frustrated - but if I do I am sure I will enjoy it as well.
| BrianBach5 8/17/09 . chapter 27
Very nice story ! I like the way you developed the characters, both old (Gary, Marasa and Toni) as well as Ruthie and her friends. Very nicely done ! I've also read your Denver version and found the scene with Armstrong especially funny, witty and well written. I hope that you can finish that one and keep going with your cross-overs and creativity.
| Victory-Starr 12/13/05 . chapter 27
That was a nice little twist there you ended with. The ending though was kinda sad. You nearly had me in tears!
Oh; and sorry about not being around. My computer was down, so, you probably get the idea.
Anyway, a great ending. This has been a very enjoyable read. Definitely a favorite. Thanks!
| snipsa 11/28/05 . chapter 27
Great final chapter to a great story! I can't wait to see what you have in store for her in Denver, hopefully it would still include our favourite McGinty's bunch ;)
I feel that you've settled everything in this story, explained every single word, all that in a very short chapter, to say I'm impressed won't cover it.
Brilliant job, can't wait to read the concluding fic!
| Snipsa 11/24/05 . chapter 26
Sorry, having some trouble logging in today.
This was yet again a brilliantly written chapter, with so much emotion and depth in it it seems as though these characters are part of real life.
I found this a very fitting way, probably the most fitting, for Ruth to leave as it shows the impact she had made not only on her close friends but also those at school, those who taught her.
I'm sad that this story is coming to an end, but can't wait for the final chapter, as well as the concluding book of this series. I do understand your need to go back to the buffyverse, a person needs diversity in life. But know this, I'll definitely keep an eye out for the next story when you do decide to continue with it.
It's been a great journey reading this well thoughout story, thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us!
| Victory-Starr 11/16/05 . chapter 25
Oh, gosh, I just finished reading this, like, 2 seconds ago and I'm nearly in tears. This is terrible! Ruthie can't leave! I don't know what you could possibly have planned to fix this major dilemma, but you're gonna have to do it fast or I might just whither away and die! I know how it feels to be told you're going to have to leave the place you love most; I really do. And because of that, I can relate to Ruthie so well I want to cry.
All in all, this was a wonderful chapter; maybe, I dare say, one of the best yet. I don't know how you can do it, but I am so glad you can! Reading and keeping up with this story has been so enjoyable. Thank you so much for writing and sharing your work with us!
| snipsa 11/16/05 . chapter 25
Sheesh, you we're almost able to have me cry at work - almost!
Wonderful chapter, definitely worth the wait! I feel so sorry for Ruth and all the rest, can't imagine what it must feel like to have to leave everything and everyone you care about!
Glad Janet finally realised what she had done, unfortunetly too late! But that's life for you!
Brilliant, keep it up, can't wait for the next installment!
| snipsa 11/8/05 . chapter 24
I wanted to wringe Janet's neck for the way she attacked Ruthie, but again you show us that the girl does have a heart. I have a feeling that she is just a confused girl who needs answers, she knows that her life was saved, but doesn't know how or why Ruthie had done it.
Mind working overtime here, sorry!
Good work, can't wait to see where you're going with this!
| Victory-Starr 11/8/05 . chapter 24
Hey, another wonderful chapter well done! I really feel sorry for Ruthie. And I know how she feels about going cold turkey. That's how I feel when I've been watching Early Edition for ages and PAX goes and replaces it with "The A-Team"!
Anyway, I really enjoyed this "edition". But, Janet is really starting to bug me! Can't she just lay off? Gee, give the poor girl (and Gary and the rest of the gang!) a break, Janet! I guess it takes certain people to be a reporter, huh?
Well, anyhow, wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more!
| Victory-Starr 11/7/05 . chapter 23
Wow! I really liked this chapter! You've done a great job here! And I really liked these lines;
“I don’t want your name popping up in this thing and forcing me to call the Coast Guard to find your waterlogged butt.”
“Just get going you little punk”
Those lines had me laughing so hard!
And I love the friendship that Ruthie has developed with Gary, Toni, and Marissa. You've worked it out real well. This is terrible about Ruth not helping with the Paper! But, I trust you have a plan, so I'll be quiet now. Please keep up the awesome work!
| snipsa 11/2/05 . chapter 23
Ahh, poor Ruthie! I wish that Janet would just drop it! But as a friend of a journalist I do know that once they get a sniff of a story they'll do anything to find out what's going on, just hope it doesn't ruin Ruthie and Gary's lives!
I can't imagine her not being "in" on the paper, it just won't be the same, so I'm pretty sure you've got a bunch of Aces still up your sleeves, can't wait for all of them to be revieled!
Brilliant, hope to read more soon!
| Victory-Starr 10/31/05 . chapter 22
Well, that chapter was another great one! I'm glad the Early Edition part of is seeming busier. For awhile there it was kinda still... But, I'm also glad it's not TOO busy; we'd end up with a bunch of Mary Sue's on here. Well, I'm drifting.
Anyway, another nice touch. I, for one, am hoping Janet won't find out about the Paper. I'm also hoping to see more of Gary. That'd be nice... You are very talented! Please keep writing!
| snipsa 10/30/05 . chapter 22
This is really getting more brilliant with each chapter. I felt like I was at the wedding ceremonies, the way they all acted, well it's pretty much a normal wedding, with all it's chaos and the two families still getting accustomed to each other.
I am so jealous of the fact that you seem to be able to so easily merge such differents parts of the story into one. The whole Janet thing alons with Simon and Lily, and then of course Ruth and the McGinty clan, everything fits perfectly into the story.
The fact that you've ended the last few chapters with Janet, seems to be a smart ploy by you, to remind us that she is a very important part of the storyline and shouldn't be underestimated. I hope that she does speak with Meredith before doing anything stupid. And I hope that Meredith will be able to find a way to get her to drop the story.
You've got me hooked to this!
| snipsa 10/28/05 . chapter 21
Very good update. Leave it to Ruthie to meet another Paper Guy!
Hope to read some more about him in future updates, I'd like to see if you have plans for him and Ruthie together.
I'm guessing the letters Janet is keeping have something to do with Gary, maybe people he has saved?
Still very good, this is progressing brilliantly!
| snipsa 10/24/05 . chapter 20
I'm so glad for Teresa, can imagine that Marissa is a bit freaked, but I don't think that it would do anything to their relationship.
Janet going to a therapist, that can be quite interesting!
I didn't remember that Meredith was her boss, that's very interesting, since she does know the truth. Maybe a bit of revealing coming later?
Anycase, again brilliant, the character development is still going strongly.
Thanks for the quick update!