ontheline 2008-04-30 . chapter 8aw, i'm really sad that you haven't updated this story in a while, cause this story is amazing! :]
srsly, i love it so far.
when i first started watching zoey 101 back in the day (or more accurately, season 2-ish), i remember zoey/logan was my first favorite couple, although i think no one agreed with me. haha.
they just seemed like they'd make a hot couple.
this story (i love the title btw) just totally rekindled my love for this pairing, lmao.
you're such a great writer, this story is so well written & entertaining & i love it.
please try to update?
i'd love you forever. :] |
Pink Blushing Kate 2008-04-13 . chapter 8SOPH! my alert on this story didn't go off! I couldn't believe it when I saw that Adam finally had a new chapter!! lol, I've missed u and ur Adamness, life is pretty hectic right now, I moved for six months so all of my stuff is in my old computer and right now I have zero time to write...but moving to the chapter, short but still good. I know what it is to feel like you lost touch with your own story, but don't worry, the magic's still there =)
Adam, oh hot hot Adam, I love his jealous side, and Nicole! Dana really needs to show up and just make them realize she's not into Adam and that they SO belong together.
Loved the subtle way you introduced Chase, like he and Zoey just met randomly and realized they haven't talked in forever, and I liked the whole awkwardness of their conversation, felt very real.
I'm so sorry it took me so long to review but I really want to read the next chapter and I'm going to at least put some new drabbles to get back on track with writing. I'll PM you more often, promise!
Luv,
Kate |
reader91 2008-03-26 . chapter 8i love this story...im glad i could catch it before it ended...Adams character is too funny i love him he make me laugh in ever chapter..update soon please |
XoCrazyGuurlPirateLuvverXo 2008-02-22 . chapter 8i really like this story! its so good! cant wait for the next update! |
amanda chaotic 2008-01-08 . chapter 8This is the best Logan / Zoey story I have read, and I've read alot of them. I absolutely love this pairing but almost no one writes any of them anymore! I love Adam and every single funny thing he says. I can't wait for you to update this its definitely one of the best stories I've read in a long time you make the characters come alive. Nice job! |
tennisplayerx33 2008-01-06 . chapter 8PLEASE UPDATE!
i am in love with the story & the pairing: loganxzoey since i love that pairing!
don't be mean, UDPATE! |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 8I think your writing is very professional. I really love it! I LOVE how Adam and Logan are similar, and how Zoey ran into Sarah. But seriously, I can't believe Jamie Lynn Spears is pregnant! Talk about a role model, just like her sister! From what I heard, they're ending the series. Because honestly, how bad would it be if she walked in the Lounge ready to burst going "LOOK WHAT CHASE AND I MADE!" XD Nonetheless, please update soon! |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 7I loved how you went deep into the characters on the sidelines. Appropriate chapter title: they're all on the outs. My favorite's was Quinn's. She probably feels exactly as you describe her. |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 6AWESOME CHAPTER! However, if I was Zoey I would NEVER crash in a guys dormitory. If Chase found out... o_0 Nonetheless, UPDATE SOON! |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 5This was very good. You capture everyones personalities really well. Especially Dana, even though I never liked her in the series. |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 3VERY GOOD! *claps hands enthusiastically* I thought it was amusing how Nicole cut out magazine pics of guys. |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 2This is really good. Obviously you've updated since Chapter 2, but I like Lola and Quinn. Dana is a bitch to me. I thought it was so funny when Logan winked at himself in the mirror and said "You still got it!" HYSTERICAL! Please update soon. |
Opaque Opal 2008-01-05 . chapter 1Oh, this is really good! I love your writing style. It's okay if you don't know anything about basketball. I don't either! I laughed when Chase and Michael made comments about Cinderella and Thumbelina. You got all their personalities down pat! |
summersgirl2526 2007-12-31 . chapter 8I love adam's jealousy issues they are so cute and funny |
JMonEy24 2007-12-30 . chapter 8finally updated lol im sticking with u so can't wait until u update. hopefully it will be quick this time lol. anyway like the new chapter but as u said its kinda short. can't wait for the next update |