WOW NAT THIS WAS A VERY VERY INTERESTING STORY...I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT AND GREAT WORK KEEP IT UP :)

Oh! NO!
You can't stop there!
Give me them back quickly... this chapter is too short. Poor Tracy, her love, Eddie is dead now, but this can open other opportunities... It seems to ma that Jack is waiting near...

I hope all is going better now!

Thank you!

I'm so glad you updated your story! I just went to read this chapter and I'm very very concerned with Tracy... Did Turner succeed in making her a killer. Hurry up Jack!
I'm stressed...

update quick

great last 3 chapters!! love this story! cant wait for more!!

I like this story. It has someintriguing stuff. I hope they save Tracy.

I love the Tracy/Vaughn relationship. My favourite scene was when they were kicking each other's ** :P Too funny. There's some UST there. LOL

Can not wait for more.

Oh! Yes!

Very good chapter! I love the concern of Nick, his links with Jack.

>You put more angst when Sloane let them only 2 more days...And that last call...Wonerful, i'm not surprised that Tracy have a little if Jack in her mind. He is so good at what he does! It's why I love him... Nadia doesn't like him?

It's so sad to see Tracy suffer... and Vaughn!

You say more for Jack are coming...GREAT! GREAT!

I CAN'T WAIT.

thank you.

Oh! Yes!

Very good chapter! I love the concern of Nick, his links with Jack.

>You put more angst when Sloane let them only 2 more days...And that last call...Wonerful, i'm not surprised that Tracy have a little if Jack in her mind. He is so good at what he does! It's why I love him... Nadia doesn't like him?

It's so sad to see Tracy suffer... and Vaughn!

You say more for Jack are coming...GREAT! GREAT!

I CAN'T WAIT.

thank you.

Excellent!

I do love your story.

It's very compelling... for me! I like the twist with Tracy's father, Jack's angry. He is fond of the woman and she is the one he went to see after the death of his daughter. It's a nice touch.

I have to tell you that I don't like Edward... Try to guess why? NO, not really.

I can't wait to see the future of "nick" with a furious Jack heading for Italy...

Thank You end bravo.

L.

Excellent!

I do love your story.

It's very compelling... for me! I like the twist with Tracy's father, Jack's angry. He is fond of the woman and she is the one he went to see after the death of his daughter. It's a nice touch.

I have to tell you that I don't like Edward... Try to guess why? NO, not really.

I can't wait to see the future of "nick" with a furious Jack heading for Italy...

Thank You and bravo.

L.

hey hey sorry its taken so long for me to review ive been way to busy! anyhoo i love this story your doing a great job so far! cant wait for more!

Oh! YES wonderfull twist! I love the end!

Jack, is he played a fool? really? (It's Jack!)

I hope Tracy is safe. And as always, i love very much the interaction between all the members of the crew, espacially The ring scene.

Did I say you I am a huge fan of Jack... and Nadia, too?

BRAVO, I love your story! The cliff is wonderfull!

Oh! YES wonderfull twist! I love the end!

Jack, is he played a fool? really? (It's Jack!)

I hope Tracy is safe. And as always, i love very much the interaction between all the members of the crew, espacially The ring scene.

Did I say you I am a huge fan of Jack... and Nadia, too?

BRAVO, I love your story! The cliff is wonderfull!

I love it.

Nice chapter, I am waiting for the confrontation Vladimir/Tracy.

I'm glad yoy planned a romantic interest for Max!
Too bad for Jack.

I love the Vaughn/Tracy, very rude and funny together!

I love IT a LOT!

I registered only to let you a review!

This story is very intriguing, the characters are compelling and I love that Vaughn didn't trust Maxwell. The tension between all of them is surprising but wellcome as well. To see the interaction Syd Nadia is wonderfull. And Jack... I am a Jack addict. And he is perfect. I hope to see him a lot.

The only thing, I hope Jack isn't just concerned about Maxwell, as a father figure and their relationship are going to grow in something more...

Keep writting and thank you.