i loved this story!

i doont get it so the reasn her brois dead is cuzof zukobut they kiss dont get me wrong im team zukobut reeaaalllllyyyyyy but it was still good:D!

I didn't really like it, it was kind of very OC

w00t! im not really a zatara fan but u mkae it so easy to be! good dang ur good!

UGh that was so fluffy I loved it! I am so favoriting this fiction!

O_o confuseing but still good

Cute ending. But here are the things it could have been better without.

'When he pulled back, his face was red.

Katara smiled. "I like you, Zuko."

"I like you too, Katara."'

and sokka's death. the flow became weird because it was romance-y and all and katara should have been too busy grieving over her bro to realize she likes zuko.

toodles, and hope my con-crit helped. you have potential.

omg this is so awsome!

even if that was kind of weird i think that you wrote that pretty well...and even if you are a kataang shipper, you make good zutara too.

Exellent fanfic. The ending came in softly and made a great impact on the story. Nicely done.

i really liked that... that was really good... i'm speechless!

Ohter than Sokka's death, great story!

That rocked!

You know you can continue this? I see so many possiblities. Anyway since you're not a big ZXK fan. That's alright. I still loved it. So yeah. Later. K15

OH HOW CUTE

UPDATE SOON