Reviews for Broken Love Triangle

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Rarecase 2007-06-06 ch 11,	abuseAww, that's so touching... I love it. You really captured the characters' essences. AWSOME JOB. :)
Gabrielle Lupin 2006-06-28 ch 3,	abuseI liked this chapter, I can't wait to see what happens to Fi, I like how you put Revan in the story, but she kinda like..just came out of no where...or at least that's what it seemed to me. *Hopes there is some REVENxCARTH(I can dream can't I). Nice job.
Gabrielle Lupin 2006-06-27 ch 2,	abuseOk, here goes my review... 1) I went to look at your profile, like I do for every fanfic i read, and I want to say I adore you for your pairings(I'm a huge Phantom of the Opera fan). 2) Nice chapter, I wish you would add a little more to it, but I'm enjoying it. 3) Oh...both of the lover boys together, whatever shall hapen next? Can't wait to read more.
Gabrielle Lupin 2006-06-27 ch 1,	abuseNice start, I'm a fan of the pairing, but I can't wait to read more, nice job once again.
chas 2006-06-18 ch 11, anon.	abuseSweet mate! Just imagining all the possibilities of what boxers mical wears is making me swoon!
Kathleen 2006-01-18 ch 11, anon.	abuseHave you given up on this? I hope not. I actually like this story better than Lost Love II.
Bald as Malak 2005-12-06 ch 11,	abuseIt's very refreshing to see an Mical/Exile story and to have a reasonable Mical overall. I think that sometimes you seem a bit rushed in your story telling. Other times, you mechanically tell us what is happening rather than letting us enjoy the moment by describing the symptoms and reactions. For example, "Mical noticed then how upset Fiona really was. She needed him right now." In contrast, this is much better, "The words sunk into Fiona like nails." Looking forward to seeing how Atton takes all this and the ensuing mayhem! I'm going to add you to my C2 (Unsung, Maligned, or Forgotten Heroes, Villains, and Other Characters). If you want me to remove the story, please let me know. BaM
Prometheus71 2005-12-06 ch 11,	abuseAw that was just beautiful! I am so glad that Mical admitted his true feelings to her. Well done on another excellently written chapter. This is one of my favourite fics, thank you for the update :)
SanguineExile 2005-12-05 ch 11,	abuseYay! An update! Mical... ever the healer... aw. You may yet convert me to being a complete Exile x Mical supporter.
DarthNexus9000 2005-12-05 ch 11,	abuseGood chapter again, like with lost love. Keep writing
Kathleen 2005-12-05 ch 10, anon.	abuseI found this one because of your other Mical/Exile romance. Are you going to continue both? I hope so. I really like this one especially. In fact I like this one better than the other one, probably because I know that Mical is still alive. I hope you go into what happened to Revan and Fiona and why they were where they were in the first place. Who is the mystery woman, Atris maybe? I guess I will just have to wait and see.
Prometheus71 2005-12-04 ch 10,	abuseThis fanfic is just brilliant! I really love what you have written here, although it looks like its not completed...hm...would love to see an update for this one!
Odious Feline 2005-10-09 ch 10,	abusehey there, i really like your story,please keep writing i really want to know what happens, so keep up the good work. O.F.
bentau (no account) 2005-10-09 ch 10, anon.	abuseseems like a dialema is springing up, aslong as its continued, i dont care what happens
Nhis'se 2005-10-08 ch 10,	abuseOh, yay! Disciple is my favorite character and it's very refreshing seeing him as one of the main characters in a fanfiction. I love your writing, keep up the good work!

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