I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*Le gasp!* Aya adores this fic with a passion. Aya especially loves the way that you got 'em together. Very nicely done! lol, no he didn't end up on a knee, reciting poetry with teh rose in his mouth! lol, though that would have put Aya on a riot roller coaster! XD Very nicely done fic, good job with trying to keep his character in an odd pairing, which Aya absolutely loves... Mind you! =^-^=

Great story!

Oh! Nicely done! :)

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=D =D!! I love this one shot! You did a really good job, and I liked the end a lot. lovelovelovelove.

This story was so awsome. I love it, keep up the good work

Wow... now I can honestly say that the idea of Hermione and Lucius together is really really SCARY! But wait, don't stop reading yet! You made it work, AND kept them (for the most part) in character, you actually *looks at you in awe* made Lucius sexy. I bow to your amazing talent.

Thanks, :D

First fics can be rusty and unpolished, yes, that I understand, lol. This one was much better *squeal* Yes, this one I really liked. You should do more Lucius/Hermoine fics *grins* there are never enough around to read. I do see by your profile that you delight in the odder, more unconventional pairings and most center around Hermoine. ^_^ I like her as well.

I feel she doesn't get half the attention she deserves- even in the movies she isn't as well developed and seems simply the know-it-all with something of a... motherly role maybe? Lucius or Sev, as older more intelligent/sophisted men are definitely better for her and would be more appreciative of her finer qualities. But how do you feel about unconventional (controversial?) slash pairings... Harry/Draco for example *tilts head* lol

that was very M rated lol

That was so good. I loved it. Lucious and Hermione, wow! I loved it! I don't think I can say that enough!

Later!

Your Lucius isn't that out of character, and the storyline is fun and sexy!

I am excited to find a good writer who shares my views in 'ships. You write Piper and Cole, and Lucius and Hermione. Thank you Thank you! This story was really good. I'm checking out all your work and notcied their is a sequal, so I can't wait to read that.

OMG OMG OMG You have to keep writing this story, IT'S BRILLIANT!
For a one shot that was one fine story!!
As Lucius replied in the story, "This is only the beginning,"
...That's gotta be something... -right?

Aw, that was lovely! Could you send your version of Lucius round for a cuppa, he's much better than mine.

Big hugs to you

Shy